Honestly.. Edward never betrayed his feelings for Bella.. Her wishing things were different so she could be a hint of something scott want is betraying her feelings for Edward. Cause that implies she does feel something for him, OUTSIDE of friendship.

And I think that's wrong. Of course Scott is a good man, but I'm sure thousands of good women have come on to Edward and he has turned them down time and time again without a thought of wishing he could.

You should have just had her turn down Scott and be done with it, of course the man was persistent, but that's not the point, she doesn't owe him anything just cause he can't no for an answer.

'Not everything is about you..' Oh please, if Edward had come back and they still ended up in this town separately, she would be a cullen.

Why does Bella tell him she's not seeing anyone?

So I'm guessing the fact that Vampire's in twilight can't change who they love isn't gonna be brought up? So Bella was locked into loving Edward as soon she turned.

Edward didn't use the company of the another tho... Tho he hurt her by leaving, he never betrayed her... Of course Bella was merely being a friend as she turned down the date offers. But it's obvious Scott has intentions, ofc she wouldn't realize that.

I hope they don't seriously fight over this... EDWARD wouldn't be wrong for being mad and she wouldn't be wrong for telling him off.

Wow, I LOVE the concept for this fic! I need more what-if-Bella-turned-sooner fics! I wish there were more, but you did such an amazing job fitting so much angst and reconciliation into just 38k words. (38k is nothing to sneeze at! I've just been reading 100k fics for a while.) Bravo, writer. Bravo.

Love the Wrinkle in Time reference. That was the first real fantasy book I ever read, at the tender age of 13; it opened up whole new worlds for me.

Emmajanepringle? Is that an Anne of Green Gables reference.? This is different from any Canon fic I've read! I love that Bella is a librarian.

Well there is drama and angst, but it's the really shallow kind. Like the shit you find in the average YA novel that fills the dollar book bins at Goodwill.

I enjoyed this story. Assward redeemed himself, in the end.

I didn't cry at this chapter. Almost. But I didn't!

I don't know whether to like Edward now or not.

Assholes not welcome in Bella's house.

... Asshole.

There needs to be a companion fic to this, called "In Mind of an Asshole". Just sayin'.

Asshole, thy name is Edward.

Rosalie is not an asshole, unlike Edward.