Reviews for Invoice
derektomlinson chapter 1 . 12/15/2019
a smirking cloud saying to winking at his girlfriend and wife tifa i already have all the lifesize candy that i will ever need and this candy doesn't melt come with a stick and like some candies you have unwrap it eat and suck on some of my candy body parts my candy has a temper when i coming home tifa hissing at saying to her boyfriend and husband cloud strife your candy ssh be quiet not so loud so i am your favourite candy now wink
derek chapter 1 . 6/30/2019
tifa saying to cloud come eat dinner and you can have your dessert later in our bedroom
Derek chapter 1 . 1/21/2019
Tifa to cloud come here and hug and kiss me right now
derek chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
tifa to cloud when did you learned how to drive a semi
Knight-XIII chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Oh my i remember reading this when u emailed the story to me... it was good the first time i read it and i found i loved reading it again . and this time I made sure to give it the review I ment to so long ago...

-K

p.s. i wrote this entire review through my psp I very proud of myself lol!
gaojo chapter 1 . 6/20/2010
A very enjoyable story. I liked the feel of the story. Definately a nice break from the more angsty submissions. I'll look forward to reading your crossover.