wow! xD This is great! I was so focused by this. It was quite entertaining.

when i was reading this the first time i should have changed dagger to pocket knife. cuz how does he hide a dagger in his jacket?

lol, if i was in the next room over id be blushing so bad and then pause, FMA? lol XD

it was a good write, there were little tiny errors but really there weren't that many, good flow, good consistency all the way through lol miles, this love/hate relationship lol great story 9/10!

so cute (repyl)