Reviews for Unexpectedly Expecting
Yeegaber chapter 1 . 9/18/2018
Sorry, silly auto correct in my review. I meant I never usually read mpreg stories!
Yeegaber chapter 16 . 9/18/2018
I never usually read more stories...but i decided to give this one a go as I’ve enjoyed a lot of your work and I was loved it! Such a sweet ending and the whole confrontation with Foyet was v tense! I was on the edge of my seat!
Well done
Reid-It-And-Weep-katelynp2012 chapter 12 . 5/21/2017
For those of you that didn't catch the reference to who the stalker is, consider watching the last few seconds of the season 4 finale (...And Back) and/or the "previously on Criminal Minds" scenes at the beginning of the season 5 premiere (Nameless, Faceless).
Guest chapter 11 . 5/21/2017
For those of you who didn't catch the reference to the stalker, consider watching the last few seconds of the season 4 finale (...And Back) and/or the "previously on Criminal Minds" scenes at the beginning of the season 5 premiere (Nameless, Faceless).
Guest chapter 16 . 1/11/2017
Im not gonna go on the details but u do know that someday and one way or the other when Jason grows up, he's gonna find that biological mother. And when he finds out about the truth he's gonna be so fucking confused and angry because seriously why the need to complicate this shit. Spencer seems to be fine being a parent in the end, and Haley seems to be accepting with how things worked out in the end. So why the secrecy? Oh yeah because there wouldn't be a story if there wasn't.

Im sorry for giving this fic a poor review but I just can't make any sense of why the boy needs to be kept in te dark. I'd be awfulky pissed if I found out that my biological parent wants to be more of an uncle to me. That will make me question my value as a child.
SciFiLvr13 chapter 12 . 10/30/2016
Cabbage patchstork!
AcrylicOtaku chapter 16 . 3/13/2016
CUTE CUTE CUUUUUTTTTTEEEE
sampam69 chapter 16 . 2/24/2016
Great story :):):)
Samantha Novak chapter 14 . 1/15/2016
I don't normally like surgical deliveries but this one was well written and entertaining! Awesome job!
Guest chapter 16 . 12/7/2015
Okay, so I normally don't like MPREG because of the complete impossibilitys but then of corse you do something awesome and use an actual scientific term (even if it in itself is impossible) and earned a buncha' brownie points. :3 I really want to see more into thing 'verse! I kinda wanna see a what if story of if Spencer died giving birth or Hotch wag the father. XD but anywhoodles, I love all your stories and want to see (or read ) more. :)
jennifer chapter 16 . 12/6/2015
Hi there, absolutely loved this story. I usually don't like mpregs that much but this one was lovely. I really felt Spencer's emotions and how terrified he was, not a lot of writers can do that. And Aaron was awesome too.
The Foyet stuff was very suspenseful and i love that Reid didn't give in and keep the baby, but was a step-parent to it instead. it felt realistic in the situation.

My only critiques would be:
Aaron calling Spencer "baby", Spencer's hormonal tantrums, and always referring to Spencer as a boy. I know Reid can look young, i felt these three things took away from his maturity as an adult, and his masculinity.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/27/2015
Love it!
cutedifferent93 chapter 16 . 11/3/2014
Ok this was fantastic! I am fairly new to the HotchXReid fandom but this was the BEST way to start it off! In one night, you have made me a die-hard fan. Wonderfully wonderful work. Keep those stories coming!
Raven J. Haile chapter 16 . 6/14/2014
This was amazing. I loved that Hailey adopted Jason. It was so sweet. :3
1sunfun chapter 16 . 6/2/2014
Good.
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