This and the previous chapter was written well you have really improved

Damn bruce is practically a drunk and bruce and diana seem ooc for some reason

Loved reading all these chapters it was a pleasures thank you.

i actually like Zatanna. im a BMWW fan but even i know that thing wont last because of her immortality(although i specifically remember in the comics she gave that up to be with Steve Trevor). But if there is someone who is perfect for Bruce, it might be Zatanna. She been his childhood friend, have the chemistry & have the same potential as a relationship with Diana can be without immortality getting in the way.

as a long time superman fan...
i can tell you that clark's in character.
wally is too...

Haha, that was so cute. Bruce Wayne was going to pick flowers! Nice, cant wait for the next update!
-S-A-P-N

Nice parallel between childhood experiences. Although one has a happier outcome.

I really really really liked this story! :D

I really like how you ended it, with the play on "independence"...FYI though, you spelled Independence with an "A" in the title. All in all, nice drabble!

Wow, I love that idea. Gaining his true love is independence :D That's a really original way of putting it, well done :)

Finally! GReat chapter, short, but to the point, I liked it.

-Jopo

Nice - short and cute with a dose of passion thrown in.

Nice try Wally. I think you did fine with both Wally and Clark, another great chapter/

-JoPo

So sweet!

Really lovely one-shot. Thought it was going to be an argument followed by some really hot sex, but I liked the way you did it too. Very sweet, and it gave me the warm fuzzies :)