Great job! I loved it! :) I'm sure this is how many men felt after the War as they went home without many friends and family. You did an excellent job! Can't wait for more! :)

This was wonderfully written! I like the style of your descriptions, especially in the second paragraph, which I think was the best of all of them. Great work, and I'm really looking forward to reading your story.

That was lovely, I could picture the cemetery perfectly, but that may be because I've been there so many times ;)

That shall be one of our first stops. This was really well done.