Such a lovely story. Personally, I wouldn't have minded a few more puns but I must disagree with you... there is no such thing as bad puns. All puns are awesome (though there are some that are more groan worthy).

I love it, thank you so much for a wonderful story, you're great!

this was so cute i bet if they continued with the series. that is how i picture arnold to propse to helga. its cute and funny at the same time love it

Is a good story I love it is a little sad about braniy

I'm so giddy right now lol

You are an amazing writer :)

nope! doesnt disappoint! awesome!

Great ending here. The whole 'savoring' was a nice touch.

Keep the good writing.

I enjoyed this so much! Well done. My only point of confusion is Brainy. He talks? In, like, sentences? Madness. At least he spoke in puns. I am pro puns. Again, good job and I'd love to read more by you.

Ah! A wonderful ending to a terrific story! Thank you so much for writing it, and congratulations on your first multi chapter fic completion!

I anxiously await your next foray into the world of Craig Bartlett!

As Curly would say, "HUZZAH!"

'Roar

Aww great ending :)

Aw adorebale ending

Hahahah... great timing, Arnold. No wonder he wanted Helga to release him; if she was holding him when the guy asked, Helga would have dropped him because of the shock.

Keep the good writing.

"I had no idea if it would sound good on paper or not. Does it? Or should I never try to write romance again? Ever?"

Fan fiction is what it sounds like, fiction, nothing is right or wrong, there is only what you see in your mind and write/type out.

If it feels right to you, then it is, you can't make a mistake with your own imagination.

No one should say that you should write one thing, or not, only *you* can determine that.

I can only offer my personal opinion that you write extremely well, your romance being especially exceptional, I'm hooked, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!

(Again)

'Roar

Sorry I'm late! :( *Looks at picked over chicken, and thumbprints in the mashed potatoes*

As you already know, I *loved* the pre-story to this, and am enjoying this story in earnest.

I love the way you've added that little extra goodness in giving everyone you've spotlighted a little room to grow, but still keeping them essentially the characters that we all know and love.

Anyhoo, I always say that I can't wait to read the next chapter, so...

'Roar

Oh. My. God.

That is probably the MOST ROMANTIC thing he could have ever done.

Oh.. oh that's so sweet. Oh I got all giggly over here..

Awwww Yes, you should write LOTS MORE romance. Lots more.

Lots.. like lots of fluff. Fluff is good. Arnold X Helga Fluff to be exact...

*squee's then coughs and tries to situate herself*

Ok, umm.. anyways..

Yeah, she better say yes, and awww

I wonder - is Phoebe Pregnant?