| Reviews for Emerald and Onyx |
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  Nobody chapter 14 . 2/9 You are a GREAT writer! You write WONDERFUL and AWESOME stories. Don't think about J. K. Rowling and how she does stuff, that's J. K. Rowling, not YOU! |
| Guest chapter 14 . 11/8/2019 Great story! |
 Lorde Shadowz chapter 3 . 8/9/2019 Yayyyy! Happy ending! |
| SN chapter 14 . 7/3/2019 Yayayayayayayayyayayay |
| SN chapter 11 . 7/2/2019 The baskilis ... |
| SN chapter 4 . 7/2/2019 Alan... Hack... Rickman... Hack hack... Love where this is going! |
| Talullah93 chapter 14 . 3/16/2019 Brilliant story! Hope you wil continue writing it |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/4/2018 alan rickman eyyyyyyy |
| KittyCatCaitlin chapter 6 . 12/2/2017 You've also used South American Spanish rather than European Spanish, for example in European Spanish "Pero Hombre" means "but man" and "mi amigo" means "my friend". I understand that you're German and writing in English then translating the English to Spanish and that's really great that you can use all three languages like that but incorrect Spanish really bothers me, I'm sorry. |
| KittyCatCaitlin chapter 6 . 12/2/2017 Loving the story so far having just read "Green eyes" but the Spanish is bothering me. The grammar is slightly wrong (for example you have used English punctuation rather than Spanish punctuation) and spoken Spanish isn't nearly so formal. You've worked with written Spanish, which is perfectly fine, but written Spanish is far more formal than verbal Spanish |
| Guest chapter 14 . 10/31/2017 I wish there was an other prologue or what ever it’s called as it’s a very nice story |
| Alex chapter 14 . 10/8/2017 I loved it soooo much. Is there any chance of continuing or is there a 3rd story cause it is really good I I want to read more. |
| LtsHrIt4ThBoyz chapter 14 . 9/13/2017 I see from your catalogue of stories, that you're back creating, again; you just haven't updated any of the stories I've been following;-). Great! I am preparing to go check out your latest, "Harry Malfoy"; it sounds intriguing! I'm just curious about why you haven't come back to this and "A Way Out" (one of my personally favorite HPff stories; definitely in my top 10! I've had them 'bookmarked' since 2014!)? I truly hope you don't feel that they're not *great* stories-They're not only interesting and have quite original premises and the writing isn't only first rate, its ADULT writing: It doesn't condescend nor does it veer off into the illogically STUPID and/or CRUEL as HP-canon is so very guilty of doing! I can't even begin to tell you just how refreshing and enjoyable those qualities are! Please consider coming back to at least these two delicious tales? Thank you for all that you do for HPff! Take care! MelJ |
| brookesk1977 chapter 14 . 4/29/2017 This story left off in a very good place, but I hope you add more to it one day. |
| IceShadow-HP chapter 14 . 4/1/2017 Any chance of finishing this story? I'll hope you will update this...can't wait to read more... |
