This is so good . I’m sorry you were Plagiarize . I can’t wait for your epilogue

Wonderfully entertaining story. Thanks for sharing

Great first chapter!

thank you for this way of dealing with thieves. There are others who just take down their stories in a huff, and I find that doesn't really work as they want it to.
also, thank you for your story, your writing was wonderful. not too fast, not too much crass, except maybe too much swearing, but I understand that it fits with the respective characters, so I'll take it with a pinch of salt.

can I just point out that regardless of how easy it is to drive 800 miles in the time you've given, including the time in the house, might be feasible in the US but does not compute in the UK and Europe. we travel to Germany once a year and one way is about 1000 miles, and that takes us two and a half days with 6 hours break, from South West UK.

I love this story.

Lol I can't believe he keeps calling her a sandwich. And his confusion over what a "fucktard" is took me out. I can't stop laughing.

I’ve never read a story with Bella and him but this one was so FUNNY! I’m absolutely obsessed with the way you wrote the back and forth between the two. I very much enjoyed everything about this story. Thank you very much for this

Great story. I hope the sequel you mentioned earlier comes about. It would be interesting to see the new world that comes of this and the new interactions with the Cullens. Honestly, I love this universe, with the prequel too, and can’t wait to see more.

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Why would Alister have long black hair? He doesn’t look like that at all in the movies. I ignore your description and come up with my own

Thoroughly enjoyed your story! Thanks for writing it and sharing it with us. Although I am Team Edward/Bella, I did enjoy the pairing of Bella and Alistair. They were believable together. Liked your version of her gift and how it totally brought down weasel Aro's reign! Got a kick out of Fae and her carrying Edward's head!LOL. Do wonder if Marcus helped rule the new Volturi with Sulpicia? Very glad that you had Bella still rather hostile towards the Cullens, even though Carlise still considers Bella his daughter.

Please consider writing more! Thanks again.

So sorry that your original story was plagiarized. As an artist, it's something that turns up for us as well and it's so not pleasant. Grrr!

Enjoying your story! I was always fascinated by the Alistair character and thought he had some interest in Bella. Your Bella certainly has a potty mouth and has done some un-Bella-ish things in the past. LOL She has far outgrown Edward and he is clueless thinking he would have any chance with her. Perhaps, the brave but meek Astrid would be perfect for Edward. She doesn't sound as wild and passionate as Bella is. Haha.

My only questions: Won't Alice be seeing all these decisions? Aro must have Alice close by, reading all these futures. He will know when Alistair goes to Bella and be waiting. I'm not sure if Alice can lay a false trail for Aro in her thoughts, so she can't help but betray Bella and Alistair through no fault of her own.

I love this story so much... this is the second time I'm reading it and honestly it's still as awesome as I remember it. I really hope you have started the sequel, I need some more of our favourite pirate. Sorry to hear about the plagiarism, thankfully it has already been taken down by the user. More grease to your elbow.