More idiocy for the sake of your full-of-holes plot: 1)why didn't mad eye test the wand immediately? 2) the wand was supposed to be covered in spells to prevent theft and 3) surely mad eye's office would be more secure than fort knox yet worm tails just strolls in, rummages through his filing cabinet, just happens to bump into the secret lever, and apparates out? COMPLETELY UNBELIEVABLE. Pull the other one. Plot cavern. I think i'm giving up on this story. Shame, it was in interesting idea.

Well, that was a waste of a letter. Wouldn't 'wormtail is hiding out at the weasleys. he's a death eater and was the secret keeper' be a better use of parchment and owl?

And WHY wouldn't sirius have left lupin a note telling him about worm tails treachery and the danger to harry? And why wouldn't he have taken the opportunity to send a message to dumbledore about the switch and the danger from the rat?

Ah, another magnificent piece of writing. It needs a sequel (hint)

Dumb play by Remus. First rule of engagement, neutralise the enemy before you get all Hollywood.

Ah damnit. Why do the bad boys get lucky

Great story so far. Nicely written and one gotta love and laugh how the Weasleys seem like an animagus magnetAnd I really love your portray on Ron. He is such an underrated character in many works here.

Really like your writing style! Great story. I really enjoyed it!

Ok, I’ll feed the author(‘s ego!) !

Well done! Loved it from beginning to end, and even while peeking through my fingers at Remus getting arrested, and yelling at Michael. Good job.

Hey there! Thank you for writing this! I know sometimes it feels like yelling into the void, so here I am, the void, yelling back. You are the backbone of the community and though it can feel like your progress is slow there are new readers out there who are so thankful to you for putting this awesome piece of art out here for us to love. Thank you!

Sirius should never give into the Bullshit about not pronouncing a name. And people seriously need to learn to get over their bullshit. They should also learn to uphold the law. And never send anyone to prison without a trial. That they should hold in the city our County holding cells until they are tried and convicted then they can be sent should they be found innocent then they should be freed no exceptions. Plus In this story you make it look like Sirius received a trial when he never did. He was sent illegally.

Plus I would also order the destruction of the Dementors or as Harry calls them Demons. Especially considering according to Bible Prophecy All Demons are going to be destroyed anyway.

Stupid shit not using Veritaserum on Peter to make sure he tells nothing but the truth. I fact when dealing With people like those of the Magical World their should be a spell or something written within their DNA making to where they can only tell the truth and can never lie.

Screw the Ministry they deserve to lose everything. They have shown that they don't have the morals, ethics, and proper reasoning skills. Plus they also prove that they are incapable of making the right chooses. Plus Harry should be told everything. Harry may be young but he isn't stupid. Plus he should be allowed how he feels about them and how they ruined his life. And as such he hates them. And points out based on what I know of your government and that of the Queen and Crown And the differences of the to legal court systems the Wizarding Worlds is a Stinking Joke.

Whether canon or AU Fanfiction The Magicals need to be stripped of their Magic. Plus The Queen and the Crown because they have proven they are idiots morons and Incapable of thinking with common sense And they are nothing more than stinking racist bigots. And because they make assumptions and gossip and the fact their judicial system is a big fat joke. In fact, I wouldn't Mind seeing Harry Give then an earful of what he thinks and say based on everything I have see you people disgust me there for I demand that magic strip every one of you of your magic and that you all are to forever be forced to face the Queen and Crown along with The Prime Minister and Parliment. Where they will be confronted with their centuries of wrongdoing and they will be forced to confess their crimes all of them that Violate British law also known as The Crowns Law including any Treaties/Charters Between Both communities. Plus I Hope Miss Vance Disowns Her Brother And His Wife And Kids and Demands that Magic Strip them of the Vance Family Magics Plus that of whatever family their mother is from. Her brother Is a smug power hungry piece of Shit. He has nothing but ruined lives and helped put Harry back into an abusive situation. That is another reason Another reason most of The British Witches and Wizards deserve to lose their magic.