YAY! ROUND 2! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA... yeah, this was sooo fun. awesome.

Somebody watches too much YGOTAS.

This was boring, pointless, ill-contrived, poorly written, and just plain bad. The idea of Bakura proposing a "game" to Marik is certainly believable and could make a very interesting plot, but what you did with it was a huge let-down. Every chapter is far too short and littered with terrible grammar.

Hm, this was really too dub-con for my tastes.

Yay! X333

That was awesome, Good story, hoping to see more, and omg yaoi ! -drools-

The joys of communicating online: timezones! It seems everyone wants to sleep once you're getting to the good parts! Please update soon!

Aw, this is so cute. Lots of grammar mistakes though, maybe think about fixing it up? The random italics and underlining throughout entire chapters is kind of unnecessary and distracting, too. But I liked it overall.

DAMN IT! T_T! I wanted to see more~~ -Pouts- DX It was getting interesting...

You're building up the suspenese! Just post the rest!

Very awesome Jorja-samaa ;w;

Cool! I especially like how Bakura called Marik 'dude' at the end. It lets you know he's all business. Update soon!

...Lemon lemon? :DD!

Good story. Cant wait for more (;