I hope she and the baby get rescued soon... Doesn't Ed already know what happened to her as far as damian, or whatever his name is, is concerned? Please update again soon!

Great chapter! Keep it up!

I can't wait to see the next chapters! please update soon... :):):)

Super awesome job! Can't wait to read more!

JACOB IS A DICKHEAD! SOMEONE NEEDS TO KICK HIS ASS!111

YAH! GO ARTEMIS! KICK JACOB IN HIS SOFT SPOT AT LEAT ONCE FOR ME! KICK HIM WHERE IT HURTS! HE'S NOT THE TRUE RULER OF ISHBAL YOU ARE! YOU ARE THE DAUGHTER OF THE KING! KICK HIM IN FRONT OF EVERYBODY BECAUSE ITS FUNNY WHEN BOYS KEEL OVER IN PAIN! YAH!

Sounds Good so Far :D

~Robina

grrrr... this is a good random time for me to charge in and kick jacob's ass with my rad black belt powers! MWAHAhAHAHAhAH! OR ED! COME KICK JACOBS ASS! DIE JACOB! x Allie turns into an evil rabid firebreathing vampire-dragon of doom! then she kicks jacob in the ass pushing him off artemis and grabshim by his wrists forcing them onto his back and up by his neck painfully, then with a knee to his back he shrieks! making allie smile :) then she rams his head into a wall again and again and again! until he passes out then she writes a crude note on him and throws him into the hallway! x :D oh the violence of me :D dramatic chapter that instantly wanted me teleported into it so i could kick jacob senseless! GRRRRR! :D someone must save her!

YAH ED! GO SAVE ARTTEMIS!

O. O thx for putting my OC in the fan fic :D that was nice of you :) only i wasnt exactly planning on making allie so jumpy... but thats okay :D you did very good :D i like the chapter and i hope that the idiot Ed decides that he should save Artemis! hello? alchemist? You can kick serious butt! go save her dammit! ... or at least realize what an idiot you are and try to reason with her father :P... well again i have to say thank you for putting in Allie :) And i will as always keep reading this :D

ED! FINALLY YOU COMETO YOUR SENSES! GOOD! IT"S ABOUT TIME!BUT GIVE THE GIRL SOME LEEWAY! ITS NOT LIKE SHE WANTS O MARRY JACOB! SHE IS TRYING TO DELAY THE INEVITABLE SO STEP UP TO THE PLATE BUDDY BOY!

Ok about my OC...

Name:Allie

Age:around 16 or 17...

Eyes:Ruby red, which is softer then most of the ishbalans piercing red eyes, a little bit more dark in color...

Skin;The inevitable tan of an ishbalan

Hair:blonde, but she dies it a dark brown,(she thinks the blonde clashes to much with her skin tone... XD)

Personality:Slightly quirky, twirls her hair often, and blushes easily...but she can be snappy at times when it comes to her pride and family, can kick butt,her feet are lethal weapons...

talents: Likes to play guitar, is extremely skilled and can play through the fire and flames (I can play that on guitar hero :D very proud of herself...)

Role: Maybe jacob could end up with her instead of artemis :D (she is a distant cousin on the fathers side and some of the only remaining family left :()

*Fact* I randomly made Allie up five minutes ago :D XD

ok so that is my OC information :D You dont have to put her in as the role i made up but, could you please put her in somewhere with some kinda role? plz? That would be nice :D anyways keep on writing and enjoy your vacation!

hi :D ok sorry for reviewing again, but, I cant PM you back so I have signed on as a n anonymous person :D Anyways could you please turn on PM capabilities so i can send you my OC? i dint like to review chapters with their information :P Thanks :D

o and you better keep writing this story -

! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! ! THIS CAN NOT HAPPEN D; artemis and Ed should never be separated D; it is not meant to be! I say screw ishbal stay back with Ed and get married geez artemis! Or Ed could at least stop acting like such a ****************************************************! Geez maybe she didnt want to tell you ok? GET A LIFE ED! Maybe she didnt like revisiting the painful memories! OK sheesh! Even though if I had to write a book on FMA and I would be ishbalan I still have to say screw ishbal! Screw damien! You love Ed right? stay with him and knock your family out and move on base! Or move back to where that awful winry lives! geez! :( xsniffx eh heh... sry :P :P um... still good chapter... just wish Ed wasnt such an idiot... maybe he should come in and rescue her from her Dad and remainder of her famnily who hasnt even been around her nor cared for her even though they were alive? While meanwhile in Resembool (i have no idea how to spell it ok?) Artemis had become like part of the family to Ed and Al? D; ed you better step up and galantly rescue her from Damien/Jacob at her wedding or i will kill you in my mind or write a fan fic displaying my extreme anger at you! XD eh heh... plz dont mind my angry outburst... just pissed of at edward... but still... I MAD AT HIM! SHORT LITTLE MUNCHKIN WORM WHO'S SMALLER THEN A DRIED OUT BEAN! LITTLE ANT! ARGH!... (Emily is taking deep breaths...)... (she is now hyperventalating...)... ( now she is whacking her head into the computer desk...)...)... Ok im better I. O (maybe) ok then... I not mad at you! this last chapter is gonna add to the stories drama! DRAMA! IN case you havent realized this is why I do bullets because i type to much... sighs... D; Ed you idiot! Ok then... keep writing your fan fic, it brings me joy because my summer is so boring :( :D (kinda) Oh and i didnt know if i could submit a minor OC... I love submitting oc's... especially to stories that can do them justice :D I mean it;s up to you... but right now i think would be a good time to add one in... i could beat up ed... and then paint my wall red with his blood! (do not mind the drake fans random outbursts...) but still i love OC's :D so if i could submit one I would be happy :D but it's up to you! :D - (drake fan has calmed down because she got off topic...) :D

GASP! THIS IS MY LONGEST MOST VIOLENT REVIEW EVER! O MY GOSH! XD ... eh heh

sry for eviewing so late! but i was with my family last weekend :D so I will review twice!

1. Aw :D embarrasment

2. Blood O. O ooh... maybe leena kidanpped him XD

3. Trap door! And Ed goes missing? YAY ACTION MIGHT COME NEXT! so now if you excuse me i am going to read now...

KEEP THIS STORY GOING! ITS REALLY GOOD!

aw ed finally realized how Artemis felt ;D so I have a few things about this to say...

it took ya awhile to figure it out but im proud of ya for listening to the song lyrics...

hahahaha poor you XD Ed broke up with ya after a day and a half XD

Artemis! Ed finally admits that he loves ya!

well poor damien... I like Ed better anyway... :D

for the Pm about how your gonna finish this fanfic! its really good :D

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! Artemis&Ed 4ever!

So dats me review! thx so much for finally making Ed stop acting like an idiot! And thx for the PM!