Much better honeymoon. Although I can only imagine how much damage will be caused with their increase of activity ;)

I'm wondering why he was so out of control this time since it wasn't his first. I thought that since he knew what to expect, he'd not bruise her. At least he didn't mope so much.

Love the sports stuff. Very funny.

Yikes! The end of their lovemaking was...whoa. Going to read next chapter now.

I love how you've reworked these few chapters. Keep up the good work! :)

I absolutely love how you've retooled the other Eclipse and Breaking Dawn chapters, and this one is no exception. One of my biggest complaints about Breaking Dawn was Edward's manic refusal to touch Bella for days on end because of the bruises. Your version is much more true to the characters. Yes, Edward would be upset, but he gets over it enough to forgive himseld and move on.

Looking forward to the next chapter you take on!

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!I must say that was cute! Are there going to be a Distractions chapter?

OMG! That wow! It made me feel butterflies when he said he could wait anymore!

mm i liked it, do you online isle esme, or also book three from bd?