I request that you either continue this or use it as the base for an entirely new story. It is increasingly difficult to find a good story about Naruto having enough with the b.s. he is put through and dishing it back out. This is a strong base for a very interesting piece of work.

Strangely i feel that this story could be good both as a oneshot or as a full blown story. I like how you had naruto snap when assaulted by the homeless, definately a straw that broke the camels back kind of thing

Good story. Very dark and gritty. Made me smile in sadistic glee reading this, not sure if that's a good thing mind you. As for the fight with the class, Naruto didn't go and beat up everyone of the kids did he? I can't imagine him beating on poor Hinata! Then again it seemed like the only ones that fought him were Sasuke and his fan club, so maybe I don't need to worry.

honestly this was probably the best first chapter of any darknaruto fics ive ever had the pleasure of reading and tbh i really hate u right now for making it a one shot and not making it any longer but still it was epic.

Wow, this is intense. I've been looking for a good Naruto finally snaps story and this one is perfect. Based on how the majority of people treat him, it's a high possibility that this could have happened. What's better is that he actually enjoyed it.

I love how well you describe the action here. All the fights are vivid (and extremely violent). I also like how you mention that no one really knows how strong he is because they never bothered to find out, or because he was always in trouble. Also, nice job with having him so wrapped up in the fight that he didn't even realize who he was hitting until it was all over.

The ending monologue is nicely done. I especially like the detail of the bloody smile, it really adds to the horror image.

Fantastic work with this story.

cool

very interesting cant wait to see where this goes

Please continue this story is kewl

CONTINUE . Seriously, this is badass incarnated in writing.

Wow. I love it, a nice dark fic. Hope you continue this someday so I can gleefully read. Anyway, just it would be cool if Naruto ended up a bit like Gaara (the whole your my reason to live is to kill thing). Maybe make Gaara like Naruto though, say Gaara has friends instead (like inverse their original situations). Just a thought though.

Thanks for the great read.

Oh and it's a good fight scene.

I think this is one of your better stories I think naruto is a sadomasachist and I cant wait until he meets gaara

This story have so much potential. please let me see an update soon

So far it has me interested I would like to see more chapters of it.

ifyou do that you should change the status of the story

Your stories always have such a huge gritty edge to them that it's just pure orgasmic experience for the dark inclined folks to read. I would love to see you continue this when you have writers block (or just when your other stories are done, may you never get writers block). Keep up the fantastic work!