This story is so precious! You made me laugh one moment and then made me want to cry the next. That ending was so darn sweet!

this is so very cute and funny and enjoyavle. the kids are so real it really could happen. roy and riza are so in character and their dynamics with the kids are just great. thank you dor this. bless you!

I died at the "noo noo's" part. I loved this story. It made me laugh quite a bit. Thanks
~ Kakkarot is Kake~

I don't even know if you're gonna read this but I just wanna tell you what a lovely fic this is. Riza and Roy are so spot on and I love the personalities of their children, Oliver was just great, like I can definitely see their child be like that and Lia was great aswell I love her quiet but curious and intuitive character, she's definitely an observer and listener.
Also I wanna say that it your writing was just great, so many awesome one liners, so funny and sweet and it was just really hopeful, it made me smile and also really happy, so thank for sharing this wonderful fic with us. Definitely one of my favorite royai fics ever! :)

I love it! I loled at the dynamics of their family. Olly's such a cheeky boy. And Lia's just the sweetest. She's a daddy's girl. Oh I love this so much! So much royai feels. It's perfect.

This was beyond perfection! Everything was so sweet and that ending *feeeeels*

Adorable!

This is the sweetest thing!

I'm dying from the cuteness

This is so cute. Riza and Roy both really deserve to experience this kind of happiness.
Favorited.

"I'm fat."
"You're pregnant – Breda's fat."
"Roy-" His wife chastised, albeit through a slight chuckle.

"Olly, go to bed." He said, trying his best to look stern. It is very hard to look stern in pyjamas and Olly knew it.

"You don't believe in ghosts."
"Of course I do – I'm six."

"So I think, Daddy, you'd be rubbish against ghosts, burglars and nasty things."

"There's a bit of wet in the middle of the bed but it's definitely not pee."

There were just so many great lines in this story that I can't list them all (although I did try...)

The last bit about Maes nearly brought me to tears.

Haha, that was adorable and hilarious! I thought Olly seemed a lot like Ed, and it makes sense, because Ed and Roy are fairly similar.

AWE! This was a barrel full of cuteness! Loved it. ;)

D'aaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww!

*dives for the insulin syringe*

That was hilarious and adorable. I love your turns of phrase...