damnit. the story is really good. i'm sorry for your loss.

Good enough... Loved little more plot

Cool chap... Who is she

Great story shame it looks like you stopped writing it

Mike knew how to craft a story, once you removed all that stupid, weird sex stuff and the absolutely ludicrous threats, it wasn't bad.. He just needed to focus more on his story crafting and leave the "fantasy" stuff alone (he was quite bad at it). Unfortunitly, he seemed to "downgrade" as the his stories continued. Leaving less and less the author and more and more the.. Well, I'm not sure... I'd say perv, but that's not really it, perv is making more "nude scenes" and "sex scenes". He kinda went to a weird spot... Anyway, for his skills an an AUTHOR I'll give him props and respect.. His sex stuff?.. NOT SO MUCH.

Okay, LOTS OF PROBLEMS WITH THIS chapter.. "short of using nibi's power".. etc.. Um jinchuriki are ONLY TAUGHT THAT.. because that makes them basically WMDs! Why would you WANT anything else? You rip KAGES APART with that! Even the ONE-TAIL! (remember the MASS-MURDER he does?).. All of this is KINDA DUMB.. naruto if he can "step out of time".. can kill ALL OF THEM, every single member of their ENTIRE CLANS and be back, before they can even finish a BLINK.. So isn't it all POINTLESS? He wins, resident BAD-ASS, can do really ANYTHING, after all, he can learn ANYTHING in quite literally a "blink of an eye"... or "between the seconds"... When time ceases to mean anything then he CANNOT be beat in any way shape or form (not in a fight, not in smarts, not in history, not in getting to a target...NOTHING). EVERYTHING becomes easy. So other then make the village FROTH at the mouth WHY DO ANY OF THIS?.. They want a demonstration?.. say "okay" and before they hear the final part of the word, behead the entire council. They couldn't stop him, time was stopped. "good enough?". Tell them, "I can kill you, all of your entire clans, and everyone that you have ever known, before you even register I'm saying this... Do you u REALLY want me to get angry at you?" "I could leave this village a mass GRAVEYARD before you could say 'ANBU' "... I think that might END this "who's the king" crap in stories.

man i wish you would write more chapter's to this story it is a very ori. story and i do really like it so i hope it will not be year's to wait for more thanks

I'm sorry to hear that he passed. He was a terrific writer and very talented. My prayers to his family

My heart goes out to his friends and family in this terrible time

But if you will forgive a moment of insensitivity

Any chance of his deleted stories being reposted as a final memorial?

Why would his family care about his fanfiction and ficwad account. Lol what? I am calling you a liar. Fuck off.

I am so sorry for your loss. Mike will be dearly missed. My thoughts and prayers are with you and Mike’s family during this difficult time.

It is indeed a very sad thing to know this news, he was a great wrighter, you and Mike's family have my condolences, i know it is a hard time and that the lose of someone loved is harsh (my father died this year too) and painful in extreme. Just remind him for who he was and remember him for all the great and good times you all had with him.

May he rest in peace, and may you, his other friends and the family find peace and closure soon.

rest in peace

So bad, so sad, Rest In Peace

You have my sympathy.