I must say that you are my frist English fanfiction. I never read one before beacause I was scared to not understand. But, it wasn't the case so I 'm proud to say how great your fiction is. It could have been another usual fiction but it's not! It's romantic but not too much, a bit sad and not banal. Despite the concentration that it asked you, i felt all the emotions ans, to me, it's the more important. I really liked it and i think it's a great one.
So thank you so much :)

Ps: hope you understand everything :/

Really nice story, well written and so original! Great idea to use that Beatles song!

That last sentence was so emotional! I really loved this alot!

Very Nice One-shot!

i usually don't like slash/femmeslash but this was beautifully written, i loved it (:

and by the end i had a tear in my eye and that takes a whole hell of a lot out of a fanfic

Very sweet. Well done.

Well done! What a lovely tale interwoven with such a dear, sweet song. Bravo!

This is awesome! So much pent up emotion, and then love, adn then losing the one you love the most. It's poetry in a story. And it'll probably be inspiration for my poems. :D

nice and elegant. thank u love the beatles.

that was excellent.