Aww I really hope you continue this! It's going great so far :)

HAHAHAHAHA I love Dragonite's, they're so wise :) Awesome chapter!

Aw poor Lance! He's awonderful detective but his disguising skills are horrible lol! Really, he'd think the Dragonite and cape would give it away!

I loved this! I hope you update soon!

haha this is funny I hope you continue :)

I wish you would continue this story! It's very well-written...all the characters have convincingly distinguishable personalities, and I just wish I knew where this was going! Can't wait to see how the relationship between Lance-I mean Chet-and Erika develops.

By the way, you've written Dragonite in perfectly. That's what did it for me, partially because Dragonite's one of my favorite Pokémon.

Bahaha, I love this. Brilliantly written, hilarious, and engaging, even though the plot hasn't likely completely kicked in yet. The way you write Lance in this is just fantastic, I laugh at every scene that he's in, and the way his Dragonite plays off of him is great.

All in all, if you ever continue this, I'm looking forward to where you're going with this story~

(This is Sammy, btw; just now remember about this fic and decided to read it. XD lol I fail)

Those two are so awkward it's cute. xD

lol lance lance you goof

Oh my, how cute and interesting! I can't wait for an update! Teehee poor Lance and his disguises!

Aha! I knew Surge was up to something XD Poor Erika, i don't think he's her type, haha. Man, Lance is such a loser, i'm glad they recognise eachother now!

BUSHWAH! How can one expect Lance to operate with out his cape and conspicuously large Dragon?

I hope they meet each other again! I want to see how they interact with each other :3 But, seriously, LT. Surge? O_o Disturbing! Update!

Brilliant chapters again!

Still very entertaining and easy to read, and the characterisation is quite good too.

And now they know who the other is! I'm sad that Sayuri had to come and ruin their touchy moment! ;O Lance is not a womanizer! He's just a very...sheltered man. I liked that chapter a lot, maybe even more then the first one...O_o