Reviews for Intrusion
UTBS279 chapter 12 . 10/24/2018
GUh. More to come? Honey, it's been two years! Lol. I really love this story and I hope one day you continue it.
FateOfChaos chapter 12 . 4/6/2018
Okay... just, wow. This story is the most fantastic, horrifying, heart wrenching, beautiful thing I’ve ever read. And let me tell you, I’ve been in quite an emotional roller coaster since I started it. I only have one problem—you haven’t updated in two years! And you literally left us hanging by a thread! Spock and Jim cannot separate minds—now what?! Ugh, it’s so beautiful and frustrating at the same time! I could cry... just, if you ever get around to finishing this, I’ll definitely be waiting. Because this story is definitely worth it.
Elanor2000 chapter 12 . 11/15/2017
Please update soon! Loving this.
FrankieHS chapter 1 . 11/9/2017
This is a great story! Please continue it!
Guest chapter 12 . 10/9/2017
Holy shit this is amazing
lauramorgenstern chapter 12 . 1/8/2017
Holy. Shit. This is an amazing story! So many of my favorite elements, and it's so well written too!
Fanfictionranger chapter 12 . 11/4/2016
So wait is Spock evil?
No Spirk? ;-;
Idk I'm as confused as Jim at the moment :/
Anyway amazing job besides that keep it up :)
Rowan Cookie chapter 12 . 10/29/2016
Please write more! I'm begging you - I just got a bit too invested in this and now I really need to know what happens!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/28/2016
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE AHHH
Rose9797 chapter 12 . 9/3/2016
Love 3 Update soon!
Drew chapter 12 . 9/1/2016
I'm really enjoying this! The writing is beautiful and you certainly have a talent charcterisation. I can't wait to read more!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/16/2016
This story is really well written and quiet enjoyable
Thank you for writing this much :)
Ohlivia.smith chapter 12 . 8/12/2016
Please update soon this is great please please continue soon :)
anastasiaeliades27 chapter 12 . 8/11/2016
hahahhaha omg i just realised how u refer to ur self as AE and i was like wait why is tht familiar to me then bam i realised those are also my inistials im an idiot...brilliant story btw cant wait
Guest chapter 12 . 8/5/2016
Good story keep it up.
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