I like Sai now. You made me like Sai. The entirety of Naruto and dozens of episodes of Boruto, and probably well over a dozen fanfics featuring him couldn't do it. But you did. In a single scene.
I *wanted* to like Sai, since I'm an artist, but I just didn't get there until right now. Thank you so much. This story is great, I've loved everything you've written (even if I'm generally not a fan of pregnancy fics.)

Stop being rude and spreading lies about Silvershine.

I hope you realize that the site you're on is called FanFiction for a reason.

It's completely written by fans and none of them get compensated in way.

Writers like Silvershine create amazing stories like Scarlet Scroll out of their passion for the fandom and sometimes this spark fades.

No matter what, they do NOT owe you anything.

Entitled readers like you acting though you've been wronged in some way piss me the f off.

Especially so since you consciously made the decision to start a story that hasn't been updated in almost a decade.

She did us an amazing favor by leaving this wonderful story on the site.

So stfu and stop badmouthing Silvershine.

THAT guest is out.

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It's unfortunate to say this... But silvershine will never update her naruto stories again. She already deleted all her naruto stories from her ao3, she's into star wars now. Unfortunate to say, she'll probably never finish her star wars stories either. Anybody who sees this should do themselves a whole world of good and steer clear of anything silvershine has written. She is not a committed author... Please spread this word to other unfortunate reader who invested their emotions and time on silvershines work... I rue the day I came across her stories

You're a super talented writer. You have an amazing gift of empathy. But i do have some critiques :fair warning, i am a little biased due to my own subjective experience of sexual assault. It breaks my heart to read such an accurate portrayal of the effects of rape... To read the dehumanization Sakura undergoes in this story is heart-wrenching. Although, i highly HIGHLY doubt Kakashi would just allow this to happen. And i also feel like Sakura would willingly choose death as an option or a life as a rogue ninja then basically allow herself to get brutally violated for months and subsequently peer pressure Kakashi into impregnating her just to end the mission that might be assigned to her again. Idk, it just seems out of character. This opinion is obviously biased, but seeing a character being treated in some an inhumane way and having Kakashi just allow it to happen... Well, i just feel like that's WORST than abandoning your teammates.

Excellent. I hated Jin with a passion. He was an ass. What a situation Sakura and Kakashi are in.

Though it is not completed, I thank you for sharing this story.

please continue

Okay, you are evil. I cant believe I will never see its end. It was the first fic that made me cry. Everything hurts and I want to die.
But you are so fucking amazing

where is sasuke?

I wonder how Sakura and Kakashi will get out of it. I just want to imagine them ending up together but I don't know how they'll get there.

This is GREAT!

So sad this wasn't finished. It's so good! If you see this comment, please come back and finish it! I want to know what happens between Kakashi and Sakura. Please. (Fingers crossed)

Ah, this was such an interesting read. I'm sad it's probably abandoned forever. I wish we could've seen the KakaSaku part where they start to actually develop feelings for one another.

You can't even spell Danzo, so please take your baseless criticism somewhere else and stop hating on our Silvershine.

Good day, mate :)

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Okay- so I’m definitely thinking that this is not a well though out plan. So the situation Sakura is left with is the following: leave and risk death within 3 weeks, have a baby by being raped for up to however long it takes to get pregnant, and tell anyone about this, you die. Just there is an answer that is not given as an option that would have the best outcome, would be much shorter, more empowering. You tell everyone. I imagine that there is some henge jutsu that could make a written document look like something else- like an advertisement for a ramen shop- distribute it to every citizen and then reveal at the same time. Or enlist a henged naruto and have him distribute flyers to everyone about this x program and Danzig and the counsel cooked up, how it could jeopardize trade, how he is dictating that someone should get pregnant, and threatening the ninjas life with death if they tell anyone or if they refuse. Quite frankly, I get pissed off at the lack of weighing risk vs rewards. If death is inevitable, then do it in a way that you chose that takes down Danzi.

You cut my heart out of my chest,

Tore it to pieces,

Set it on fire,

Buried the ashes,

And stomped upon my soul.

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You have changed my life with your writing.

Especially with this fic.

Please continue to inspire,

And live, my Queen.

Forever waiting.

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