Not bad. Not bad at all. Turning Voldemort's followers against him was very satisfying. Good riddance to Fudge and Dumbledore, too.

Hi there.
I really loved your fanfic. It's high time the Purebloods stopped following that liar Tom Riddle.

Why is Luna at school in Harry's first year? She's a year younger, and in Ginny's year.

Love it! Harry gets a good life, Sirius stays out of jail, Snape gets revenge, AND Dumbles gets what he deserves!

it was a fun quick read
loved it!

Much more simple this way and Harry's life only sucked a little.

Great ... ending? Is there any more? Would love to see them years later... did Snape marry?Padfoot or Mooney’s kids? New fan

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story.

Isabella Amayan
Age: 18
Description: dark skin, deep purple eyes and waist length straight black hair. Comes from a very old Hispanic pureblood family. Isabella I s Avery soft spoken person, and lives life with a stern hand but a soft heart. She's very level headed, but has a temper to rival Walburga Black's when she gets mad. Isabella has a younger brother, Mateo, who has curly Brown hair, similar skin tone, green eyes and is 11 years old.
Parents: Isabella's mother is Zoe Amayan, nee Grey (another pureblood family, American) ands her father is Pablo Amayan. Both her parents are 37 years old, with Zoe being older.

very good.

Great short story and wonderful ending. Thanks for sharing!

A good idea, just not executed very well, in my opinion.

Shame you didn't finish thus as I enjoyed it certainly a different take on things.

Thank you. It is not often that Dumbledore receives what he deserves. Bravo.

Very well done!