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LEPrecon elf holly short chapter 1 . 9/4/2016 why did he leave?! what happened after that? come on, you can't leave it like that, it's not fair! |
ordinarylittleme chapter 3 . 7/4/2015 This is nice and sweet, but short and too fluffy. I hope there'll be one about the war. |
quill.is.mightier chapter 3 . 5/9/2015 Wishing there were more chapters! |
ZC chapter 3 . 7/26/2013 In the end, I think he believes he'll do it again, no matter how many times if it leads to the same result. :) I love it! |
ZC chapter 2 . 7/26/2013 That was so sweet! |
alinecustodio chapter 1 . 4/27/2013 god |
Whatchoofelloverfor chapter 3 . 7/3/2012 Okay, I know it' been over a year since you've updated this, so maybe you've given up... but please don't give up? I like this slightly-more-serious side of James and Lily. |
mugglehugger chapter 3 . 3/26/2012 All three chapters are very well-written and have so much feeling in them. Thanks for sharing! |
CandleLighted chapter 3 . 12/21/2011 Love your story, you write both of them very well! Please continue :) Constructive criticism: the last lines of the second and third chapter are a liiittle cheesy ;) |
ashowl142 chapter 3 . 10/8/2011 i love how you write them both! and oh my goodness you are making me fall in love with james potter. i would love if you would write more :) |
Ess Tee94 chapter 3 . 9/11/2011 How i wish i had a james... |
Inez chapter 3 . 9/11/2011 hey corny sloth this is a beautiful story. There really is no other word for it. I love it. and I hope you're going to write another chapter. Much love Inez |
Amanda chapter 3 . 5/28/2011 aww so sweet! please please please continue! love it so far! keep writing . |
s.e.h.c chapter 3 . 4/19/2011 Who knew that three short little chapters could be so bloody fantastic! Every one had me smiling and wanting more! I love it! |
asdhfijdhfoasidjoaisd chapter 3 . 4/19/2011 Mmm. Wonderful. I love your writing style. And I love how it didn't get too explicit, but was still hot enough to satisfy me (for now!). Well done. |