Reviews for Winning
LEPrecon elf holly short chapter 1 . 9/4/2016
why did he leave?! what happened after that? come on, you can't leave it like that, it's not fair!
ordinarylittleme chapter 3 . 7/4/2015
This is nice and sweet, but short and too fluffy. I hope there'll be one about the war.
quill.is.mightier chapter 3 . 5/9/2015
Wishing there were more chapters!
ZC chapter 3 . 7/26/2013
In the end, I think he believes he'll do it again, no matter how many times if it leads to the same result. :) I love it!
ZC chapter 2 . 7/26/2013
That was so sweet!
alinecustodio chapter 1 . 4/27/2013
god
Whatchoofelloverfor chapter 3 . 7/3/2012
Okay, I know it' been over a year since you've updated this, so maybe you've given up... but please don't give up? I like this slightly-more-serious side of James and Lily.
mugglehugger chapter 3 . 3/26/2012
All three chapters are very well-written and have so much feeling in them. Thanks for sharing!
CandleLighted chapter 3 . 12/21/2011
Love your story, you write both of them very well! Please continue :)

Constructive criticism: the last lines of the second and third chapter are a liiittle cheesy ;)
ashowl142 chapter 3 . 10/8/2011
i love how you write them both! and oh my goodness you are making me fall in love with james potter. i would love if you would write more :)
Ess Tee94 chapter 3 . 9/11/2011
How i wish i had a james...
Inez chapter 3 . 9/11/2011
hey corny sloth

this is a beautiful story. There really is no other word for it.

I love it.

and I hope you're going to write another chapter.

Much love

Inez
Amanda chapter 3 . 5/28/2011
aww so sweet! please please please continue! love it so far! keep writing .
s.e.h.c chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
Who knew that three short little chapters could be so bloody fantastic! Every one had me smiling and wanting more! I love it!
asdhfijdhfoasidjoaisd chapter 3 . 4/19/2011
Mmm. Wonderful. I love your writing style. And I love how it didn't get too explicit, but was still hot enough to satisfy me (for now!). Well done.
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