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ZaCloud chapter 3 . 3/2/2011 Oooh man, this is an amazing story so far. You do a wonderful job rendering the thoughts of Arthur, and describing physical motions and details. Perhaps a little much in that regard, but it's still a pleasure to read. The grim subject matter has definitely caught my sympathy, so I would really love to see the story continued and concluded, to find out what's going to happen. I really hope you can continue it soon. Thanks for writing what you have so far. |
Rashiq chapter 3 . 11/5/2010 Lol poor iggy XD |
JCJK chapter 3 . 10/26/2010 omg I love your story! Is the one that hurt Al, Ivan? Idk but it seems like it! |
xRandomosityx chapter 3 . 10/16/2010 Hot damn girl! What done did be taking you so long to update? Great chapter as always! You describe everything so well! I could really feel Arthur's anguish when he had the little mental breakdown in his bedroom! ZOMG, sooo goood! I can't wait to here more about how Alfred's feeling now that he's woken up~~ Racheal Lietz eh? Where'd you ever come up with such a beautiful name! And Arthur's in his forties eh? How did you end up deciding on such a sexy age? Well my dear, I look forward to reading more of your beautifully written works~~ Keep up the fantastic work! Kya~~~ ily for writting this! |
nupinoop296 chapter 3 . 10/16/2010 Sweet! You updated! Uh oh. Alfred probably really scared... Poor baby. |
NotWeird chapter 3 . 10/16/2010 OMG THANK YOU! I really liked this chapter dahling! Good job. |
NotWeird chapter 1 . 8/27/2010 Please update...It would make me so happy. |
Reeces chapter 2 . 7/19/2010 Update please! |
Rashiq chapter 2 . 6/26/2010 Who could do such a thing to Alfred! *pulls out a bazooka and aims* Just tell me who, I'll be happy to get rid of them. No one treats America like that (Lives in America XD) a-anyways, It's really good! Hope you write more soon~! 3 |
NotWeird chapter 2 . 6/15/2010 I loved it. Poor America... This, like your other work, is great. Keep updating,for they will be greatly anticipated. |
Ambrosia Mae chapter 2 . 6/13/2010 OMG. . . . Beautiful and suspensful! -holds hand in fist and pumps into the air- YOU MUST CONTINUE! YOU MUST YOU MUST! |
Moirailis chapter 2 . 6/13/2010 :( Update soon! I wanna know what Iggy is gonna do for Al~ |
xRandomosityx chapter 2 . 6/12/2010 ZOMG NUUU! Alfred! Kare kare is the master of suspence! You did a great job with this chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more! It was Ivan wasn't it! FFFFFF XD |
Mi Yool chapter 2 . 6/11/2010 This is beautifully written and quite chilling. I await more. :D |
Lord Axxingtons chapter 2 . 6/11/2010 Alfreeeeed! D: This story is getting better and better. It's really gripping. More please! (Oh, and I knew it :P) |