Reviews for Grown Apart
ZaCloud chapter 3 . 3/2/2011
Oooh man, this is an amazing story so far. You do a wonderful job rendering the thoughts of Arthur, and describing physical motions and details. Perhaps a little much in that regard, but it's still a pleasure to read. The grim subject matter has definitely caught my sympathy, so I would really love to see the story continued and concluded, to find out what's going to happen.

I really hope you can continue it soon. Thanks for writing what you have so far.
Rashiq chapter 3 . 11/5/2010
Lol poor iggy XD
JCJK chapter 3 . 10/26/2010
omg I love your story! Is the one that hurt Al, Ivan? Idk but it seems like it!
xRandomosityx chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Hot damn girl! What done did be taking you so long to update? Great chapter as always! You describe everything so well! I could really feel Arthur's anguish when he had the little mental breakdown in his bedroom! ZOMG, sooo goood! I can't wait to here more about how Alfred's feeling now that he's woken up~~ Racheal Lietz eh? Where'd you ever come up with such a beautiful name! And Arthur's in his forties eh? How did you end up deciding on such a sexy age?

Well my dear, I look forward to reading more of your beautifully written works~~ Keep up the fantastic work!

Kya~~~ ily for writting this!
nupinoop296 chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
Sweet! You updated!

Uh oh. Alfred probably really scared... Poor baby.
NotWeird chapter 3 . 10/16/2010
OMG THANK YOU! I really liked this chapter dahling! Good job.
NotWeird chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Please update...It would make me so happy.
Reeces chapter 2 . 7/19/2010
Update please!
Rashiq chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
Who could do such a thing to Alfred! *pulls out a bazooka and aims* Just tell me who, I'll be happy to get rid of them. No one treats America like that (Lives in America XD)

a-anyways, It's really good! Hope you write more soon~! 3
NotWeird chapter 2 . 6/15/2010
I loved it. Poor America... This, like your other work, is great. Keep updating,for they will be greatly anticipated.
Ambrosia Mae chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
OMG. . . . Beautiful and suspensful! -holds hand in fist and pumps into the air- YOU MUST CONTINUE! YOU MUST YOU MUST!
Moirailis chapter 2 . 6/13/2010
:( Update soon! I wanna know what Iggy is gonna do for Al~
xRandomosityx chapter 2 . 6/12/2010
ZOMG NUUU! Alfred! Kare kare is the master of suspence! You did a great job with this chapter! Please update soon! I can't wait to read more!

It was Ivan wasn't it! FFFFFF XD
Mi Yool chapter 2 . 6/11/2010
This is beautifully written and quite chilling. I await more. :D
Lord Axxingtons chapter 2 . 6/11/2010
Alfreeeeed! D: This story is getting better and better. It's really gripping. More please! (Oh, and I knew it :P)
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