Yoo Misa gonna get wrecked by Sydney.

From Chapter 15 here and it's bullshit how Sydney gave Light her real name. She litearlly could have said anything else.

You just referenced DN Angel. Love it

I can tell you were a young kid when you wrote this. Your immaturity bleeds through your writing every other paragraph.

Omg I had grown to love thisxX I loooooveeee itttttttttt! I'm so reading that part 2. Damn it L realize it already!

MY NAME IS THEODORA

This. Is. Amazing.

Your writing is amazing! Absolutely wonderful, I was hooked and read it all in one day. You are also hilarious. So excited to read the sequel

I love you :)

The plot train has gone off the rails and flipped into a river before violently exploding underwater, and all the shrapnel that's left of it cannot be salvaged as it all floats down a waterfall into the depths, never to be seen again.

I'll admit, I found this to be a very enjoyable Death Note fanfiction… until it wasn't that at all. The focus of the story has been mangled to such an awkward degree that I can't bring myself to continue reading anymore without causing myself genuine mental pain.

However, since everything else was quite well done before Red Water, you still have my attention. I look forward to reading your other works.

I can tell that you were channeling your own pain into these last few chapters. Stay strong. Thought you may feel alone sometimes, you are anything but.

Now THIS is an exceptional chapter! The rising tension was paced perfectly, nobody felt OOC, and by the end of it there is a satisfying resolution to the conflict as the characters develop from their choices. Truly, you shine in writing drama.

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So she can scale the side of a building, take down an entire police task force, and is effectively immortal, but can't hold her own against eight petty students? I'm calling bulls**t on that.

Your writing is amazing, I love it