I'm looking forward to seeing how Time Lord Lily is different. Love that Donna's memory wasn't wiped.

It's a neat idea to have the other Doctor thrown in here. I'm interested in seeing what happens.

Absolutely love River's moment here with Lily. That was just wonderful how she reassured her.

I like the touch of Jenny being Lily's in her own way.

Oh, and that last review was for the last chapter od Midnight, just so you can understand what I'm talking about...

*giggles*

Wow! That chapter was MARVELLOUS! I liked how Lily essentially forced the creature to reveal itself to the others. BEAUTIFULLY done!

(And, no, I don't care that I'm reviewing however many years too late... :-D )

I hate River as much as you do and it makes me laugh, at the end, where you said write a story where you kill her off. I would read that. Love your story, good job! :)

Well, that's interesting! I look forward to seeing what happens in the ext installation of this series!

Awwww, poor Lily! I hope that she gets healed soon! Nice chapter!

Yay! Everyone lives! I love those days.

Awww, Jenny. I wish that she would meet the Doctor again, but we'll see. Excellent chapter!

Yay! Loving this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Yay! Jenny's here! I like Jenny, wish that the Doctor knew she was alive. Can't wait for more!

He's always running, isn't he? Nice job!

Yes, well, make a jumper OC and have her appear with River before the Doctor gets there, and let her say that line. Ooo! Idea! (goes off and starts writing story) Excellent chapter!