| Reviews for Homestead |
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Edward W chapter 10 . 5/12 I would recommend looking up "bluegrass banjo" on YouTube. Thumbnail is a black guy with a straw hat holding a banjo. It's pretty fast-paced, and upbeat; a pretty good song for a wedding! |
Iamsecretlynot chapter 11 . 6/24/2019 CUTE |
Iamsecretlynot chapter 8 . 6/24/2019 Kudos to you. I can't count how much time I've spent on the wookiepedia to make sure things line up correctly |
Iamsecretlynot chapter 3 . 6/24/2019 *rubs hands* I'm ready for the slowburn |
John Smith chapter 12 . 12/28/2017 Just a phenomenal story. I love that you chose to write the lead-up to what we saw in the episode. The details were woven so brilliantly that it felt like it could have been from a well-written film rather than a fic based on a side-plot episode. Fantastic, beautiful, artful, and wonderful. I love it! |
John Smith chapter 11 . 12/28/2017 Aww I loved this chapter. I knew there'd be a robbery like this, but I didn't know how you'd do it, and I just loved it. What a great contrast to how it went before. Wonderful job. Love it! |
John Smith chapter 10 . 12/28/2017 Very cute chapter! The wedding was adorable. For a second I was worried about the kids, then they were just under the table, food-drunk. Very cute! Sweet ending, too. It always encourages people when they see a happy couple. |
John Smith chapter 9 . 12/27/2017 Very sweet chapter again. I love Chios even more after this one. Seeing how Suu reacts to a thief (or thieves) stealing a Nuna in the night is perfect and a great way to show what she's fighting through as she moves forward in her life. Nice chapter again! |
John Smith chapter 8 . 12/27/2017 Awww this is beautiful and cute and sweet all at once. I love how you had this come-to-Jesus talk between them where he admitted all these secrets, and she was able to piece together her understanding of whom he was. It was really a great exposition chapter, as they all are, but this one moved things forward a little more solidly. Great job! |
John Smith chapter 7 . 12/27/2017 This chapter was phenomenal. I wasn't expecting things to go in this direction. I like how, in each chapter, you develop things a bit further and with enough intrigue to keep it from feeling like things are ever getting boring. Nicely done! |
John Smith chapter 6 . 12/26/2017 Awww, yet another great installment. This one explored that internal conflict so well. It's developing how things move forward so well, and I really love it! Great job! |
John Smith chapter 5 . 12/26/2017 Fantastic chapter. I really, really loved this. It's moving the romance forward so perfectly and naturally. Suu is curious and nervous, and that's why she asks him to stay. She's lonely and vulnerable, and so is he, and they are drawn together by that. It's just really, really well done. The descriptions of her feelings, of the drawing, of the conversation - it's just fantastically well done. Great job! |
John Smith chapter 4 . 12/26/2017 I love that you gave this chapter with the quick updates from each day. It helped the time to pass but didn't do a full on timeskip. Clever and interesting writing! |
John Smith chapter 3 . 12/26/2017 This chapter didn't feel clunky to me at all! I thought it was very well done and once again gave us a good understanding of how things work on the farm. Very nicely done. |
John Smith chapter 2 . 12/26/2017 Yet another great chapter. I enjoyed seeing the interactions between characters, and I really love the way you show the different characters' reactions and thoughts as the story unfolds. Very well done! |