I mean, that certainly wasn't misogynistic at all.

im sorry but i can't deal with natsume being such an assh0le and mikan being too stupid for her own good. it just doesnt make sense. everything seemed too rushed and off i just can't. nonetheless, this story has a potential so i hope you wont throw that away. take time to revise and edit.

natsume is so fake might as well make mikan and tsubasa end up together. haha i dont like natsume's character here sorry

This screamed OOC the whole time I was reading it. It felt different, not a gakuen alice fic. Natsume won't do that to Mikan and although nattie's an arrogant bastard, he is not shallow. He wont brag about his looks every damn chance he gets like he needed validation like some vain man. That was not the premise you set for him. He thinks deep, always careful and wary even professional. And can we talk about Mikan acting like a dumb girl in a chick flick. The romance was rushed. For someone who loved a person all her life, it took her a day to get over him. Apart from that there have been plenty of author inserts (do you think it was cool for natsume to surf, i bet it's the only time he gets to practice the sport), unnecessary characters (who wont even help us dig deeper into your canon portrayal). Homophobic and racist narration comments. But this was written years ago. You should have read this one and start editing the work. Both leads lack depth. They don't look in love to me.

wow. Mind Blown. This is a great story even though I just skimmed through it. I'll consider reading the whole thing when I feel like it. c:

The make up scene was quite fast but the end with youichi denying his parents was hilarious! Hehe

Meh, I think it was WAY to rushed. How could she still love him when she still thinks he cheated on her? And besides, even if he didn't cheat on her, his behavior towards her was still unexeptable. How can you be so mean to such a wonderful girlfriend? I was kinda hoping this story would be mikanxtsubasa or mikanxoc. Natsume isn't all that great. Don't get me wrong I love Mikan and Natsume, but in some stories Natsume isn't as great as he is in the manga.

Youichi's so mean. Haha LOL
This was an awesome story

F*** U TSUBASA! HOW DARE U DO THAT TO MIKAN AND MIKASA! U SUCH A PLAYBOY! U ALREADY HAVE A PREGNANT GIRLFRIEND BUT U STILL WANA AN ANOTHER GIRLFRIEND!WHO DO YOU THINK U ARE?! A CASANOVA?! Natsume!Please save Mikan!

:'( :-( :'( what a sad story... Dont worry Tsubasa,I will always support u! KYAAA! 3 3

Yay,some flashback! But Mikan,why u said that to Tsubasa?! U hurt his filling u know! I know it stupid but, I hope this fanfic will become a tsubasaxmikan..

Why those woman of Sean look like she know Natsume?! Still love the story 3

BAKA Mikan! Why dont u want to hear what Hotaru want to say?! Still,love this story3 3

Haha! Natsume jelous now! Wow,Hotaru was so cool 33 I like her

Yay! Good bye Sumire! Hello Mikan! Still I fill bad about Sumire getting fired.. But,I hope this time at Hawaii there got some fighthing screen man and man just for a one woman!