PLEASE START REPOSTING VIDEO GIRL? YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I MISS THAT STORY. I SAW THAT IT WAS DELETED AND I AM CRYING.

I AM NOT EVEN KIDDING.

OMG NO NO NO!

please repost is asap (;

Awwwwwwwwwww

This was so poetic and beautiful. It's rare for someone to paint such a vivid picture in your mind with just words. I loved it. It's such a shame about what happened between Macy and Nick. Their relationship is really interesting. It's sad that she's left alone walking the beach reminiscing over their times together. This was sad but really great.

I was reading some classic Video Girl chapters, and I noticed you had a new story up.

I'm pretty sure I smiled big enough to touch the North Pole AND the South Pole at the same time.

I've never actually seen JONAS, but...This was amazing! I loved Macy...but the end...so sad. :/

I like how even though Nate's gone she still avoids the water. :) Very cool.

Anyways...great job! As always! :D :D

Can't wait to see even more of your writing!

3.

Hannah

This whole time I was thinking Nick died.

Color me shocked. I don't know what happened, and honestly, I don't want to know.

It was bittersweet. I think Macy really does keep Nick afloat.

I'd figured he would run out of songs eventually, you can't write about heartbreak when you're happy. :D

This was really fantastic!

The whole time I was reading it like Nick died. I thoroughly enjoyed all of the flashbacks, because Nick and Macy are just too precious when they're together. It was very bittersweet.

And then, imagine my surprise when Nick DIDN'T die...

I'm trying so hard to think of a situation that isn't heartbreaking... but I can't. I mean, you left the ending up to me (which was incredibly refreshing... you gave enough info that the story was complete and I didn't feel like you left me hanging, but yet it was vague enough for me to draw my own conclusions.) And since you left the end up to me, here I am trying my hardest to salvage the beautiful Nacy relationship you created. And I had myself all resigned and at peace with a sad ending when I started reading too...

This was tragic, but still really sweet.

Great job!

~Lauren

this is amazing I love it :)

This is amazing

So I find it kind of amusing, but I'm also sort of jealous. I don't know how you do it but you find the perfect things to describe descriptions without going overboard, and I love that. But I'm also kind of jealous that I can't do that. But, hey, to each their own.

I think I have quite the theory on what happened to them, but it's just not put together in my head yet. What I can say, though, is that I'm happy this was one of those bittersweet stories where everything wasn't sad, or angst or fluffy - it just had the right proportions, if you can call it that.

Anyways, seriously snazzy story you've got going on here.

I love it! I have so many scenarios of where Nate is and what happened! Lol it was great! I 3 that your writing again; you got too much talent to keep locked up inside you! Share it with the world because your stories(even the sad and difficult parts) make people smile :D

Awwwww...I thought Nick died :/

I found myself crying...sucker for a good Nacy story.

This was a great story, nice and long too!

this was pretty good, even though it was kind of jumpy your writing style is great. oh and becuase I'm a total lacrosse attack position nerd (I actully play) it lacrosse stick :)

sorry...I'm weird.

but Anyway, i really really liked this!