have him meet mavis and zeref. they can even help him with his dimension hopping.

skip the gaunla island arc. it will most likely not happen because of lissana being there and natsu being more mature from the from the way you portray LAXUS there is no need for the harvest festival attack arc. though please dont skip the tenrou arc cause thats my favourite arc if its written well. and i do think you should have already mentioned zeref by now and have naruto seek zeref out to try to ask zeref about dimension hopping or have naruto meet zeref accidentally. and it makes much more sense than to roam around and look for what he is looking for seemingly nowhere.

i will honest if you make people from elemental nations appears, it will kill the mode and destroy the story for me. but ofc it will be good if there glipse of whats going on in nations time to time and maybe naruto able to go back as a spirit or something at most just to say goodbye to people from back home or be able to fight for last time and finish war and than dissapear saying something along the line "his dream was to bring peace but he cant stay in the world to watch his dream come true but he will still watch over the nations forever" nothing more please. i also think a little bit of jellal x erza will be bad for story unless ofc they are just few moments where they sort things up but nothing like the close kiss scene from the anime. but ofc it is upto you this was just what i want. even naruto going back to nations to save them one last time like lets say he made deal with god dimension or maybe he was allowed to do it just once and stay there for just short time as he was the CHILD OF PROPHECY might also just ruin the story but it might also make it good.

hey what do you mean birthday October 21st? it is October 10. i kinda take offence in that. but dont worry i loving the story otherwise.

i like this naruto much better. also originally naruto should have been close to 18 not 17 because naruto was very close 17 when war started so he should be close to 18 if it has been exactly 1 year since war started.

He still gonna continue right

please continue or put up for adoption, if this story is adopted or if your king o adopt it can you dm who adopted it

this is just too good , please come back to it soon .

this is great , but please no Erza x Jellal angst . it was going well , dont bring the angst .

damn this is an amazing story , loved it so much . its a shame it has not been updated in 7 years , please come back to it and finish it , its truly a great story so far .

Well, I'm both saddened and relieved you quit writing this. As much as i enjoyed it initially, you were starting to ruin it for me. I didn't mind him doing his own thing occasionally but you were separating him too much for my taste. I'm assuming you wanted canon to proceed normally, but i like stories where i get to see what changed because of Naruto.

Also, the romance was bugging me. For someone who said they wouldn't write it as a harem, it sure felt like one. I also can't stand all the secrets Erza is keeping. I'd almost have liked to see Naruto break things off with erza, at least temporarily, after everything is revealed during the tower of heaven. Maybe have a few dates with Mira and Ultear.

Ad itself as this review probably is, i feel like you've done a disservice to the erzaXnaruto relationship. I mean, her actions and secrecy don't show that she trusts him, especially after all he's shared with her. You write them being really close, buy in reality I'd think Naruto would have severe trust issues. Think about how imperative it is to a shinobi to have information and she's obviously hiding a lot. Not to mention her zero pda is a little over the top. I wouldn't want to be with someone who made me feellike they were embarrassed if others knew.

Atualize por favor ️️

Oh man the tension in your story is soo good! You manage to pull of having a super Op character great as the tension isn't combat based.

Since it been years since you posted I'm sad to assume your muse died though? If so thanks for the story so far

Erza's character is waaaaaaay off the charts. And if your gonna counter that with a "Oh don't worry its not canon yet, she will change as the story goes," just stop dude. her backstory and one ova proves that she was a strct woman, and the way you portray her as a lovey-dovey honey to Naruto is just wrong.