awwww...por kid. Edward will have to admire him for ending his tormenter

first time was Liam and Maggie CULLEN, but in this chapter you wrote "the MASONS"
Anyway...Yay for Charlie !

if you still need, I could try. Maybe you could send me the first chapters too, for the tiny mistakes here and there

victoria is a "Hunter"? Is she related to James?
Very interesting twist, with Alice a bitch and a nice Victoria. You were totally unpredictable on this one

poor kids ! And poor Charlie !

That's too bad that you won't be continuing this story. I really wanted to know how Edward would react to finding out that Jasper killed his mother. It was a really bad place to leave off because there is a bit of a cliff hanger at the end of chapter 18. I hope someone else continues this story, it has a great plot and great characters.

I won't lie I am upset that you won't be writing this story anymore...You are a wonderful writer...and this is such a great story! So emotional! So sad! But I just love it!

But real life comes first. I get it, we all get it. There will be other amazing stories to read.

You should continue writing though. Even if its a novel.

I hope that you do not delete this story...I understand that you can not continue writing it anymore. But I HATE when authors delete their stories, not caring if their readers that loved their stories get upset. So many writers do that! So many of my favorite fan fictions have been deleted and let me tell you it sucks...

I don't think you are a homophobe...Though religious or not you are a writer. Writers can write about whatever they want. Just because you write about rape and slash doesn't mean your going to hell or anything. It is a story! Jasper, Emmett and Bella and James went through hell in this story and are only teenagers trying to survive.

Yes its a slash story but Edward and Jasper haven't gotten together and don't make out or anything.

Anyway I hope somebody does continue this story...Its a great story! I actually honesty always miss this story and want to read it but when I come back it never has been updated. :(

"I believe God created us to LOVE and we can't choose who we love, even if that person is of the same sex. God also created us as sexual beings, we are to enjoy it and also multiply his people."

Snaps to KareBear1965

I loved this story! I was so excited to read the next chapter though. No one can force you to continue this story, but I really hope you find someone to finish it. It's an awesome story and you did a great job to continue it this far... I can't even get past the 4th or 5th chapter on my own... Gonna get to it this summer, oh well
aria007

It's really strange this thing where you write slash but you think being homosexual is against your beliefs. If you actually truly believed that you wouldn't have written it in the first place.
I just wanted to tell you that I cannot believe in a god that would condemn love, any form of it, I do not believe in the bible because it says some atrocious things, for instance that being gay is wrong. And I sincerely hope that someday you'll open your eyes to that, and see that you can keep your faith and be tolerant and accepting at the same time, because THAT is what god is all about, he's about love not discrimination.

I loved this story but am definitely not up to the task of taking it up.

My family is Catholic but I am not. I was partially raised in two churches but never took any religious ceremonies. I do celebrate Easter and Christmas but-sorry-I've spent too much time in history and anthropology classes to actually believe in the bible. I do believe that Jesus was a real man. My family thinks I'm going to hell for my beliefs but I don't make fun of theirs. I do believe in a higher power but not one singular God. I hope that you have a good day and hope that you find someone who will do this story justice.

I comend you for standing up for your beliefs. Only you know what direction God wants to take your life. Shock shock I'm also a Christain, but I also belive slightly different than you. I believe God created us to LOVE and we can't choose who we love, even if that person is of the same sex. God also created us as sexual beings, we are to enjoy it and also multiply his people.

Each of us Christains have to find in ourselves just what direction God wants us to take with our lives, only you can decide what is right in your eyes and heart.

I have really enjoyed this story. You're a talented writer.

I'm not up to the task of taking over this story as I'm trying to finish up the one's I've got going so I can have more time to work on my original story lines. I wish you luck with finding the right person to finish this story.

God Bless
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I love this story, and really hope you will continue it!

Amazing story! I do hope you decide to continue writing :)

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Hissy x