Wow, this is well written, I know this review is nearly seven years after the last update but, good story.

Update...

I have enjoyed this story immensely. I've always wanted Jaypaw to be a warrior rather than taking the easy way out and becoming a medicine cat. Your story is one of the best that I've read on here, and I hope you'll consider coming back to it.

Just want to make one prediction/guess; the MedCat that abused the foresight without Starclan powers was Goosefeather.

I haven't forgiven Brightheart for that either, and I actually got pissed when she treated him that way because he can sense just fine.

Good story no clue if your continuing it but it is really good. Also Tigerheart wasn't truly evil.

I REALLY love this story! It is so awesome that you made the characters the way they are, but is Breezepaw good? He wasn't in the series... anyway, i hope to see more of Hollypaw/ Shadow because I love her and Jaypaw. Keep writing please!

Cool story. Can't wait to read more.

Great story, I hope you're continuing it.

Please finish your story. This is amazing writing and i like it more than the series

I love ur story. This is one of the best warriors fanfics I've read.

Great chapter! Im really happy that you updated!

Something makes me feel that Hawkfrost isn't all that bad... I'd love to see him somehow switch sides in this story... Perhaps almost redeem himself.

Im really looking forward to reading more! Thanks for the update!

Wow...seriously, this chapter was awesome.O_O

Amazing chapter! Please continue!:D

Two words: FREAKIN AWESOME!

Thank you so much for this amazing fic :D i've been reading this since the beginning and its just been so amazing all the way with a wonderful plotline, descriptions that are fully detailed and lovely characters all very well formed. Please keep on updating :)

I luv this story :D I always wondered wat Jayfeather or Jaypaw would be lime if he was a warrior!