sometimes it's the simplest way that's best
this is a really good story. keep updating

XD aside from Tayuya's (most likely faked) death, this chapter is hilarious

Okay, now I'm confused. Is Orochimaru nice in this story or not?

YES! Danzo is good in this fic!

great story.

Your intermissions are scary. I love your story though…

will i just read all chapters and you sir should get an hug for Naruto jk.. your an great writer to mix comedy and action was an good idea so i salute you sir

Oh man, i got to tell ya, Naruto, by saying those things, you just sign your death contract, the only reason your alive is because of the kyuubi. Hinata... NICE JOB GETTING YOUR MAN!

THAT WAS HILARIOUS! Hinata 'That's why i wear the jackets in the first place... I'm just too damn sexy.' HILARIOUS STUFF, KEEP THEM COMING!

if there in his subconcious did the breast grope really happen

this is a very promising start i look forward to veiwing the rest of this story and i hope it is a interesting as the beggining

hinata is right

Well, my reading ends here.

This is all so generally bland. I can stand the in-story author notes (even though they are terrible, ever seen a book use one of those? ), lame humor and average (in my opinion) writing style, but the story offers no value. There is no tension, no serious character development, and the twists are terrible and if not obvious then at least hardly innovative. It's a sitcom, a time sink, with a good idea at the start but no real followup. Sorry, but I simply do not like it.

I was actually quite offended with that chapter. I understand people complains about Sasuke being an Emo years after the massacre, but writing "He had the look of an emo" 3 days after it is rather insensitive. Give him some break, eh?

He was also the editor for Icha Icha Tactics during his training trip as he explained when he is deciphering the code on Fukusaku's back.