This is BS.

that was the most beautiful thing i've ever read in my entire life. it brought me to tears.

'twas fabulous

This is truly amazing. i applaud you sue and helen for the impressive writing techniques you have used, especially the use of irony and imperitive language.

This is just SHIT! I mean, it dosn't have a plot and it's just stupid! I don't write storys on my one. Wanna know way? Because I stink, but and you do to... Sorry my bad english.

Nice story but very short.

Hmmm, it dragged a bit in the middle, but I liked it's subtle message about the crisis in the Middle East.

I think the summery probably took longer to write then the story

Didn't You Say It Was A Long One-Shot?

The Whole Thing Says:

"Do you want a biscuit?" said Ron over his shoulder whilst he stirred her coffee. Two sugars and lots of milk had become part of his daily routine every morning since the 24th August, their wedding day. When Hermione left, Harry entered the room. Ron and Harry started making out. Hermione came in and said "tit milk".

The end.

So I Think You Need To Re-Do It..

why does it come up with only 63 words?

Anyway, this is brilliant and a really good love story

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this is my by far the best fanfic ive ever read in my entire life. well done.

i love the beauty of your writing style, so original.