| Reviews for The Shining Dark |
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Fantastic Story chapter 1 . 3/16/2019 Wow it’s been ages since I’ve visited this story, but let me tell you, this remains one of the most amazing and well written fan fictions I’ve had the pleasure to read. It honestly doesn’t get enough attention (I think the sci fi elements may be daunting at first glance). Given the, uh, sizable mess that was the final arc and last few chapters of Bleach it’s refreshing to remember this exists. It’s unfortunate that you probably won’t continue but I understand. Responsibilities call, interests evolve, and a story of this magnitude requires a LOT of time and energy. I’ve been a long time fan and now that I have a (very) limited grasp of how to use digital art programs I’d love to do some art for this story. Much of it may be beyond my ability given the technology, spaceships, and alien creatures, but if I produce something decent I’ll be posting it publicly. And just in case there’s any doubt, know that your effort is greatly appreciated. Thank you for providing this stellar work. |
A Man of Few Words chapter 6 . 8/15/2018 Helmet on a hoverbike? I'm fairly certain the only thing surviving that crash would be the helmet. |
A Man of Few Words chapter 4 . 8/15/2018 This is just so incredible already. Such a smooth and subtle damned way of introducing Ichigo's hollow (here and foreshadowed in subsequent chapters) that I smacked my desk and screamed with glee. Amazing... just amazing. I'm guessing the station is also infiltrated. I am completely hooked. Just your "Rated M" warning is one of the greatest things I have ever seen, and I've been reading here over a decade. I gotta get stuck back in so this review is gonna have to be short. |
Winged Serpent of Light - BOTM chapter 33 . 2/3/2017 Familiar enough to intrigue me, yet different enough to keep me guessing... a well made fanfiction. Please keep writing. |
Guest chapter 31 . 11/8/2016 Man i amlost got detention 4 the first time in my life u need to update |
Irelandgal131 chapter 33 . 7/21/2016 love this story! Can't wait to see what happens :) |
Cavisze chapter 33 . 6/22/2016 The plot has been an enjoyable read! Thank you for all your time and effort that you have put into this. Your details really give a lot of imagery, and I can see the story as I read it. |
Kuchiki24 chapter 33 . 5/27/2016 it's oka..I'm still patiently waiting for the next chapter! |
His Royal Gothness chapter 4 . 5/15/2016 This is really good, it's very well written and has me on the edge of my seat, can't wait to continue! |
foolish intentions chapter 1 . 3/25/2016 Hella fuckin rad and totally immersive. Love that word choice. "chassis" is a fav. |
Guest chapter 33 . 12/3/2015 OMG! I just love your story 3 please don't stop writing... I love how you make the adaptation, you're awesome :3 Earilmadith21 |
Jenny ice chapter 33 . 7/28/2015 Just found this little jewel while looking for another story...lets just say I completely forgot about the other story I was looking for. This. Fanfic. Is. One. Of. The. Best. I. Have. Ever. Read. Period. The details you use to describe the action and the creativity use incorporate to go with the plot of the syory is BRILLIANT! Please update soon! |
LunaBianca chapter 33 . 3/21/2015 The story still grips me. What a fascinating way to incorporate Nel! I really enjoyed the last two chapters and eagerly await more. I don't have any critique to offer... Well, maybe I want to know what is happening with Isshin, Karin and Yuzu. And I always like the Ichigo and Rukia interaction...The scenes with Sora were really moving. You're doing a stellar job with this tale, Trip, and I appreciate all of the time and creative energy you give. Thanks for writing! |
magicarnival chapter 33 . 3/19/2015 Oh my god, this fic is amazing! You've done an incredible job reimagining the world and fitting the Bleach characters in perfectly, as well as keeping many of the same plot points and characterization. I love it! But I particularly love your portrayal of Ichigo and Rukia's relationship, it's absolutely beautiful. I'm definitely looking forward to more! I was honestly so disappointed to realized I'd gotten to the last chapter, I wanted to keep reading! I can't wait to find out what's going on with the dream Rukia had (and this White Moon business. I know it's Rukia's thing in the manga, but I imagine you're hinting at something by having the Hollows give her a unique, identifiable code name? Also what was the business about the fertility permits or something? Is she sterile? So many questions, but I'm really looking forward to finding out the answers!). |
Guest chapter 33 . 3/2/2015 Duh, duh, Dunnnnnnn! Don't leave me hanging on this forever! I cannot wait for the next chapter in our bleached-out-space-adventure! |