Reviews for Fiancée
EmmaCarstairs01 chapter 7 . 7/20
wow, what a great sequel. it ties together nicely with "Boyfriend" and I love how the pieces start to fall together with the dangers in the wizarding world and the reasons why petunia cannot be happy for lily and james.
GooberPea chapter 8 . 6/5
This was a satisfying sequel! Lily put a lot more effort into her relationship with Petunia than I think I would have, so I feel extra sorry for her that it couldn’t work out. But it makes sense, and you did a great job. Perfect ending!
0nce Upon My Story chapter 7 . 9/21/2019
This was an excellent work, although not quite as good as Boyfriend. Still, it's definitely worth reading :)
hey sorry but chapter 4 . 3/27/2019
it says puddlemere's only girl is a beater but then later talks about how puddlemere's chaser was a she.
Hayley chapter 4 . 11/24/2018
I’ve lost track of how many times I’ve read this. I read it at least once a year for... oh, at least four years. It’s so good. I hope you’re still writing. You should definitely try to write your own romance book. You’re so amazingly wonderful at capturing the fantasy of the perfect (as in, caring and genuine and good-looking WITH flaws and therefore perfect, ie, James Potter) boyfriend and relatable girl. I know it’s extremely unlikely that you still read all of these reviews, but maybe one day you’ll feel like going back and reading them! If you are, I hope you’re still writing. You definitely should be.

"He'll take care of you until the very end when I can't be there anymore. He'll look after you. I know he will."

I don’t know if I caught this the first time around. “Until the very end.” That’s what James said to Lily in the books. It’s so sad reading this and knowing that they die. It’s also a bit sad bc there are no James Potters at my high school... only Peter Pettigrews.

That sounds so negative... but I do still love reading this! James is so perfect and ahakaold it’s funny too oH AND PETUNIA AND LILY YOY WRITE SIBLINGS SO WELL SURELY YOU HAVE A SISTER YOU ABSOLUTEY MUST I LOVE LOVE LOVE READING ABOUT SISTER RELATIONSHIPS THAT ARE ACCURATE BC THEYRE SO ODD AND UNIQUE AND COMPLEX SO THANK YOU
BloodyDireWolf chapter 8 . 11/23/2018
Another obsessive read:)
AMProngs chapter 7 . 9/28/2018
Enjoyed this very much. Thank you!
sophiethesponge chapter 2 . 9/10/2018
James you really pulled a Lily
Charlie0925 chapter 7 . 8/4/2018
Aww, I do love these two you have created here! Brilliant writing here honey, I really enjoyed this! ;o)
Lila chapter 8 . 7/4/2018
This Tory was absolutely amazing. Thank you!
Sindhuja chapter 1 . 5/27/2018
this series really gave Lily and James a life. made them more than just the people who died way before the story began.
unfittingpuzzlepieces chapter 8 . 1/16/2018
Gosh I loved this story. I love how it makes for a perfect background for Petunias relationship with Harry and her stories about her sister. This is dangerously close to becoming (at least partly) headcanon to me
Guest chapter 4 . 9/7/2017
Hey Molly, you wrote that Lily's mom was 54. And here it's written that her dad is 53. Does that actually mean that her father is younger than her mother? Or is it just a mistake?
Don't mind it ok. I love your fanfics. I really do. You're actually the best
Anonymous chapter 1 . 8/31/2017
Oh god I totally love this one! You are a great writer molly,, you have described James as no one else. He's really adorable in boyfriend and in fiance as well. I love the last chapter of both the fanfics and I really appreciate your writing.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2017
OMG LOL
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