I'm just loving this. Can't wait for more. This is amazingly written story and it's just so awesome and everything.

Very good chapter. I like it so much. I wanna read the next chapter soon. !

I like it

haha I love it! I got so excited when I sow this

omg I remember I read this story so time ago and now theres a new chapter!? thats so cool although I have to re-read the whole thing to refresh my memory. I always thought this characters could bring more to the table story wise, they shouldve made a whole season just for the russians background stories..thank you so much for this amazing gift!

yay u finally updated, awesome chapter update soon

Oh, I'm so happy you updated, I was beginning to fear you had stopped writing this because I hadn't heard anything from you for so long. It's always a joy to read this story, even if it is so painful (if you know what I mean?).

Max is going to wake up, it seems. Don't know if I like that, but he doesn't really deserve to die, so guess it is okay.

I wanna know what is going to happen. First chapter is still standing clear in my memory, though I didn't think Tala and his team would be a part. But poor Kai has to be everywhere at the same time.

As always, some of the scenes are confusing, but it is this confusion which makes it so interesting. I don't have any advise to this chapter, it's good and makes sense. And I still love that way of writing :)

Cya at the next update.

Hey! I have been waiting for extremely long to read next chapter. I won't claim that I thought about this particular story everyday... But every second or third day? Something like that, cause you are really genius.

I'm sorry I won't write anymore, but I'm sick, my head is floating, and I'm pretty sure I didn't understand most of the chapter because my brain is slow and you have that very complicated writing style I love. It confused my brain... Quite fun.

Anyway, I can't manage to comment on anymore, and I'm very sorry for that, cause you really are the best writer I have met here. I hope you continue to write, no matter how stressed you get. No, I beg of you to do so, cause I really, REALLY love your story!

amazing chapter, i cant wait 2 find out wat happens next

such a suspenseful chapter. update soon

As always, interesting and perfect. I seriously can't help loving this. And you begin with something interesting and only first reveal it in the end, where you make it into a cliffy. You keep getting me want to read on, so fantastic!

But what I find most interesting in this chapter is that Boris and Voltaire has played this game (or a game a lot like this) with Kai ever since he was his smallest. Boris and Voltaire... Leave the kid alone, he doesn't deserve it! He's too cute...

But I'm sad for Tala... Damn. He's caught too, and now Kai have two people to worry about, two people that I'm sure turn into four before anyone has time to think twice. Detective SS has taken on an impossible task, really, I don't think he will ever be able to help Kai.

Lastly, I think it is one of the first times I have seen your grammar and spelling slip. Until now, you have been so close to perfection it's svcary, but in this chapter, I think you slipped four or five times, replacing a word with another one or spelling something wrongly. Four-five times is not bad, it's better than most, but just wanted to make you aware of it.

That's it from me, I'm waiting excitedly for the next update See ya later xD

another amazing chapter. i cant wait2 find out what happened to soon

That was absolutely lovely xD Uh, think it's not fair for Ian, he put up such a great fight! Hope he is going to find a way to get out of it without Kai... even if I lik too see the poor boy suffer... (Both of them, most Kai, like him the most!)

Boris not nice against young Kai, but didn't expect otherwise. Though, as far as I know, he didn't break the boy, hope it beats him up inside, HAHA!

Could imagine Kai being so worried about it. Hmm... Wonder if they know where he is, the rest of the Blitz-boys, might be able to help him... though Boris would make sure not to let it happen, probably... Then I can enjoy watching a BIG fight between Boris' underlings and the Blitz-boys, I want that!

Once again, I have no critic. I didn't see a single spellingerror, I haven't found a single flaw, you really are as amazing as I thought the first time I read your chapter. I'm getting so excited about this story, and I so want to know how it ends. Have the feeling it ends with Kai's death, but... I'm not sure. Hope, though... Dunno why, but hope... and thinks... Max is going to survive. Think. It doesn't fit if he dies.

i really love this story. everytime u update, it makes my day. update soon

Again, lovely! Seriously, you are so good at writing this, it's incredible! Hmmm... Don't know if I want Tala and the rest of the blitz-boys to die, or if I want them to survive... Both could be great.

Detective... Detective SS... Yeah, I thought Kai were doing just fine alone, it's not like his friend ended up in a coma or anything xD SS's got to do something, or else... Well, would like to see the 'or else', there are so many interesting possibilities, and with your mind, it would be something genius! But it might mean the death of two of my faves (Tal and Bry) and two characters I like (Ian and Spence)... But as said, don't know if I want to have them dead or not.

Though, I love the fact that Boris has given Kai a note without even having done it. Of course, it's no surprise, considering the man Boris is, but way to go for putting Kai in mental misery for no reason.

I also loved how everything was connected to each other, how the whole chapter was set up. It's genius, really good, I very much loved it.

Anyway, waiting for next update ;) As long as you doesn't get stressed out because of it, I want you to send next chapter as soon as possible