Holy crap, I loved this so much! The way you built up the tension and then that twist at the end! Truly great. Thanks for sharing :D

I really liked this story, I think you have a wonderful way with describing detail in all your writings that you need to do more so that others may have decent fan fiction to read, myself included. I get sick of all the stories on here that it get's old having to sift through and find good ones. Arigato...

I feel like I've read this before somewhere else? Still well written though.

Aw. I loved it. 3 But I would love to know who Sora's first was. Maybe I just missed it somehow.

awwwwwwwwwwww sooo cuteee~~~~

Woot! that was awesome and if i had four hands i would give it four thumbs up!

...Wow! That was really beautiful and powerful. I got a bit teary-eyed throughout some of it. All in all, the writing was great, the story was great, the romance was very great. I enjoyed this! Thanks for writing it, and good job!

-Savvy

P.S. Why do I totally have the feeling that Sora's first was Leon? Teeheehee!

Ahhh. I don't know how I feel about this at all! Because...well, it's so well done, but it...ah. Everything about it is perfect, exactly right, except that part with Sora having been with someone else. It's just so unrealistic, you know? But I can't just leave and ignore a story like this because it confuses me, because you worked on it and it's really good! So yeah, mixed feelings. But I guess you deserve props for straying from the norm and not just writing another piece about how they get back and hook up. I guess the idea of a mystery man taking Sora's virginity just screams "creep" to me. Eheh. Enough babbling from me, though. You really did a nice job with this.

This was well done and beautifully written. I can actually see this happening. I love the touch of angst you had going there. By the way, who was Sora’s first? I could read this over and over again. Great job!

A romantic, realistic Riku/Sora story. These are very rare to find and you just wrote it so beautiful. I wish I could write like this. By the way, who was this "First"?

I almost cried o.o I understand how Riku and Sora both felt and it was like O.O T.T

Very well written, i loved it!

Oh, I really loved reading this~! I like the flow of time in this. You did a lovely job on this story! Keeping writing~!

I haven't reviewed on fanfic in so long, but I just had to review this one. I must say that this is absolutely brilliant. I love how you really captured the characters perfectly. It's nice to see Sora not being childish like he usually is in other fanfics or Riku being overly confident. You should make a sequel. I hope you get more reviews.

I think I added two views for this, sorry... My phone works in mysterious ways, lol. Sorry in advance for any spelling errors.

Anyways, I think I nosebled at the scene, even if it wasn't that long xD

Riku threw me off a little, getting all moody like that. I could understand where he was coming from, but at the same time I expected him to start questioning Sora.

Oh well, it turned out in the end and that's what matters. But considerably it wasn't either's first one? A backstory maybe?

Lovely work~!

That was brilliant! You see what I mean; this website needs writers like you to catch the true essence that is Riku x Sora! You both never let anyone down with a good fic to read. Plus, you two have given me meaning to continue on reading KH fanfics, even though they have been going down the drain lately. Hopefully, I shall be one of those writers who give the fans fics that stay true to the original francise in the future.