Edward and Emmett in the same room would be a war zone, but Edward and Jacob in same room wouldn’t be a war zone? Are you kidding me Carlisle?! Edward and Jacob hate each other! It should have been Edward and Jasper, Emmett and Jacob.

For the girls, I would’ve put Rosalie with Renesmee because they are cute together as aunt and niece. Alice and Bella, simply because Alice loves Bella like a sister. And yes Alice would drive Bella nuts but Bella doesn’t seem to complain as much about fashion as she did when she was human via movie verse, cannot remember if it said anything in the books.

HEY! WHERE THE HELL IS LEAH?! I WANT LEAH!

is Jenny Sheppard a refrence to NCIS if not amazing name choice

This story was amazing, this must have taken a long time to write!

This is one amazing story!

isn't stan walker a famous kiwi musician?

i would have already killed lulu

This is good! You could do a squeal about Lulu's family after this and how the Cullens keep in touch and give them pranks to do on their mother

awusome

"RAPE!"
"RAPE!"
"RAPE!"

Cause of death: 24-hour laughter

BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAOHMYFREAKINGOSH THS IS SO DAMN HILARIOUS! IN YO FACE LULOOSER! AHAAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHA…(dies after 24 hours of laughing)

Cute I love the POV switching :)

I love te story! And having PoV from Esme and Lulu sounds fun :)

This was quite funny to read...lol I love the wife swap show and wouldn't mind watching this in real life...

Would you please consider writing the reunion of the McClains and Lulu's reaction to her house?

The thing about changing pov is that alot of things are copied over and over agian from different perspectives when you could easily wipe it all out with 3rd perspective. It might even be good for you to try limmited 3rd point perspective. Again i like your story i just want to help your writinng grow.