| Reviews for Across the Line |
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Dream chapter 19 . 1/13/2019 I read all the story in two days, it is really good! Good job! |
fzntzstic chapter 19 . 11/22/2014 Love this story SOO much! Update soon, and don't think I missed the fact u haven't updated close to a year! |
shoang chapter 19 . 3/26/2014 Just finished marathoning all 19 chapters, went to click the next chapter button only to be met with an audible 'aw fuck' :(. Eagerly awaiting the next update, love the story so much. So good. |
RegalTeratorn chapter 19 . 2/1/2014 Author person (your name escapes me at the moment) i would like to say i FREAKIN LOVE this story it is absolutly incredable, ok beyond incredable. The story is good and has many twists, Roxas and Naminè are exactly how I always invisioned them, and Sora's a dipshit as well, so points there as well. So to wrap it up, I LOVE this story it's funny and serious at the same time, keep writing my friend, and we'll chat later Link |
The Dark Flair chapter 19 . 1/28/2014 It took me two days to read all of this from the beginning. And I love it! There's gonna be more, right? ...Right!? |
atl13 chapter 18 . 1/19/2014 Hey! I'm so happy to see you updated, made my night :) Aww this chap was cute and intense, very well written . Keep up the good work! I was wondering approximately how many more chapters? |
xXellesmeraXx chapter 18 . 1/16/2014 awheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this is so adorable. you NEED to write more. please? k thanks! lol just kidding. i thought the fluff was well written, and i read alot of fluff so i know what im talking about lol. excited to see where this goes! ellie |
Random-Fandom-Sauce chapter 17 . 1/2/2014 Yay! This Is really good, are you going to continue it? Please do! |
Van chapter 17 . 12/19/2013 HEY! I reread the entire story from scratch and I am LOVING it! I'm so glad you decided to edit/continue this story because for me it really was a great story with a great plot etc. Just wanted to drop a quick review saying what a great job you've done, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters! Van |
Steph chapter 17 . 12/18/2013 Your story is wonderful and really entertaining! Please keep on updating for us. I'd love to read more. (: |
Guest chapter 17 . 12/8/2013 Ahmigawd it's so cute. I want a boyfriend like Ven or Roxas-the drugs and stuff. |
GummyDrive chapter 17 . 12/7/2013 This is truly a wonderful surprise! I'll have to reread the whole thing though 'cause my memory's a bit fuzzy. Lol! Love this chapter by the way :) |
shoang chapter 17 . 12/6/2013 update ! haven't even read the chapter yet, just excited. welcome back :D |
Re-exist chapter 1 . 8/9/2013 You mispelled losing in the summary. |
AkaKageXIII chapter 17 . 5/8/2013 You said that Roxas was turning 16 and has been smoking since Xion's death 2 years before does that mean him and Xion had sex at 13? |