Reviews for Across the Line
Dream chapter 19 . 1/13/2019
I read all the story in two days, it is really good! Good job!
fzntzstic chapter 19 . 11/22/2014
Love this story SOO much! Update soon, and don't think I missed the fact u haven't updated close to a year!
shoang chapter 19 . 3/26/2014
Just finished marathoning all 19 chapters, went to click the next chapter button only to be met with an audible 'aw fuck' :(. Eagerly awaiting the next update, love the story so much. So good.
RegalTeratorn chapter 19 . 2/1/2014
Author person (your name escapes me at the moment) i would like to say i FREAKIN LOVE this story it is absolutly incredable, ok beyond incredable. The story is good and has many twists, Roxas and Naminè are exactly how I always invisioned them, and Sora's a dipshit as well, so points there as well. So to wrap it up, I LOVE this story it's funny and serious at the same time, keep writing my friend, and we'll chat later

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The Dark Flair chapter 19 . 1/28/2014
It took me two days to read all of this from the beginning. And I love it! There's gonna be more, right? ...Right!?
atl13 chapter 18 . 1/19/2014
Hey! I'm so happy to see you updated, made my night :)
Aww this chap was cute and intense, very well written . Keep up the good work!
I was wondering approximately how many more chapters?
xXellesmeraXx chapter 18 . 1/16/2014
awheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this is so adorable. you NEED to write more. please? k thanks!
lol just kidding. i thought the fluff was well written, and i read alot of fluff so i know what im talking about lol. excited to see where this goes!
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Random-Fandom-Sauce chapter 17 . 1/2/2014
Yay! This Is really good, are you going to continue it? Please do!
Van chapter 17 . 12/19/2013
HEY! I reread the entire story from scratch and I am LOVING it! I'm so glad you decided to edit/continue this story because for me it really was a great story with a great plot etc. Just wanted to drop a quick review saying what a great job you've done, I'm really looking forward to the next chapters!

Van
Steph chapter 17 . 12/18/2013
Your story is wonderful and really entertaining! Please keep on updating for us. I'd love to read more. (:
Guest chapter 17 . 12/8/2013
Ahmigawd it's so cute. I want a boyfriend like Ven or Roxas-the drugs and stuff.
GummyDrive chapter 17 . 12/7/2013
This is truly a wonderful surprise! I'll have to reread the whole thing though 'cause my memory's a bit fuzzy. Lol! Love this chapter by the way :)
shoang chapter 17 . 12/6/2013
update ! haven't even read the chapter yet, just excited. welcome back :D
Re-exist chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
You mispelled losing in the summary.
AkaKageXIII chapter 17 . 5/8/2013
You said that Roxas was turning 16 and has been smoking since Xion's death 2 years before does that mean him and Xion had sex at 13?
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