Doyle created empire? The show with all the black people? So unexpected. Thought lord of the rings would have been more his thing.

I was wondering when you would use Rory to have her try to convince Chris to not go through with the lawsuit.

You had me going back and forth emotionally with this one. I can't believe I fell for the Logan and Rory hooking up scenario. I should've known better! And then at the end, when we thought she was going back to Jess but instead she actually heads home. I'm getting whiplash here.

Poor Marianos. They won't know what hit them once Logan pops up at their hotel.

Jess couldn't afford the amazing dinner and now Logan is there? Yikes.

Glad lorelai talked Rory into going to ca. She needed that trip to get her mind off everything.

He's in jail. I have no idea how you are coming up with all this drama, but keep it coming!

You are horrible! After an exciting chapter filled with all that Chris Luke fighting goodness, you just had to do that to lorelai. Ok, I'm not going to lie. I half expected that someone would've accidentally hit her or fell into her or something. I'm glad it didn't happen, but still, for drama's sake.

Emily broke up with them via mail? I'm surprised she did it permanently. Not just a cooling off period amount of time. And Chris? Oh no! Nothing with Chris ever turns out well. The apartment shopping sounded like oodles of fun. Feet and phlegm. Luke's comment about them already having toured there was pretty funny.

Great chapter. Loved the drama. You did a great job capturing the characters and how they would react. Now, I know Jess was a jerk in high school, but you would have thought he would have been cool with Lane. Not because of Rory but because the music would have tied them together, almost like books and Rory.

Leave the note Rory! Then you won't have to worry about telling her future news she won't want to hear :)

This chapter was jammed pack with drama. How did you do that? I'm glad lorelai was finally able to tell Luke she's pregnant. Can't wait to read about his reaction in the next.

Is it really hold me close young tiny dancer? I heard somewhere that even though they knew it was wrong, they still sang it with young tony danza. So I've been singing it that way since, meh, close enough. Now I know the actual words :)

The you know interruptions were pretty funny.

I love stories with a young Jess in them, but this is hard to read with the formatting.

Where's the rest of the story? Your public demands more? Too many lose ends right now. Will Chris drop the suit? When will Rory and Jess work things out? Will we ever see their wedding day? What will Luke and Lorelai name Baby Boy Danes? Will be be born healthy?