| Reviews for Dragon Preoccupation |
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PutMoneyInThyPurse chapter 1 . 10/10/2017 "This is... something." I LOVE YOUR HICCUP. And your Gobber is going to be the most beloved person ever after this to my heart. OF COURSE he noticed missing materials. Ohgods this is PERFECTION. I love it. |
The Little Chibi chapter 1 . 7/19/2014 This explains everything. Brilliant. |
Fae-and-night chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 Ah, sweet, naive Gobber. |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2012 made me laugh |
CupcakeGoodness101 chapter 1 . 12/8/2011 Haha I love it! I could so picture this happening. lol. |
Punzie the Platypus chapter 1 . 11/24/2011 Gobber's just like, "Ah, I'll 'eave 'im alone." Large amounts of astonishment at the Kill Ring and he probably thinks to himself, "I should have seen the signs!" Wonderful job, as always. Another cookie for you! XD |
QChronoD chapter 1 . 1/11/2011 Awesome little story. Definitely would love to read more like this. |
Silkmouse chapter 1 . 12/12/2010 You should definitly write more chapters, Gobber is one of my favorite characters, and I want to see his opinion during the movie. Please, please, please write another chapter? |
mystery writer5775 chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 I like it. Now we need an insight of his thoughts after he sees what happened |
Fates My Bitch chapter 1 . 7/26/2010 Okay. I love Gobber (honestly, I don't think he is appreciated enough by fans) and the fact he knows Hiccup so well. I love the part about ignoring the odd things Hiccup does but the scene with the saddle and the scene with "one of those days" is my favorite because, often, its true and awkward. Awesome story. Keep writing more. :D |
keep-me-posted chapter 1 . 6/8/2010 Haha, love it! I like how you explain that Gobber knew something was up [after all, he shares the shop with Hiccup most of the time] but decided to just ignore it. And lol to Hiccup's line, "This is..something." :P Your stories continue to amaze me. |
randomfan chapter 1 . 6/7/2010 This story is hilarious! Gobber had to have noticed something going on, he's way too perceptive about people in general not to. This was a perfect, and hysterical, explanation of what went through his head as he did nothing. You've totally nailed his POV! |
Kiomori chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 Oh, Gobber! If only you knew what Hiccup was really doing...but then again it makes it so much funnier when he just suspects oddness! I loved the scene with the saddle. Talk about an awkward situation. But I agree that Gobber had to have seen something at some point, with Hiccup making so many things in the forge. Great job! |
marmelada chapter 1 . 6/5/2010 Really nice :) I like the exploration of the character that is not so often mentioned, and hardly ever is important. Good job :) |
Gumdrop Boo - Ch4rms chapter 1 . 6/4/2010 Oh wow. I was just giggling so much while reading this story partially because the 'See you tomorrow' song from the HTTYD movie score is playing over my earphones and it matches up perfectly while reading this story. I love how you've taken a whole chapter and have filled it with nothing but thoughts. Not so much dialogue and description but the roll-around thoughts of a character that doesn't get written or explored that often in this fandom. Oh Gobber, the unassuming uncle-like figure :) I enjoy your staccato sentences that are appropriate to keep the reader in his thoughts. Like the second to last paragraph as Gobber watches him go-mostly all in his head deciding how weird Hiccup is, and would never conclude that the little rascal was training a dragon. Love the sprinkling of the art/design comparisons, and the rarer words you use i.e. instead of 'heavy' you use 'cumbersome' :) Awesome! Glad I stumbled upon this nice little thoughts piece. |