| Reviews for Awake and Alive |
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christti chapter 8 . 2/15 you had me going there! I'm loving this story! |
christti chapter 5 . 2/14 can i just say i f*king love this story? Five chapters in and I don't want to read because i don't want it to ever finnish! |
Claude Amelia Song chapter 13 . 5/16/2019 This is genuinely one of the most beautiful and touching stories I have ever read and I cannot begin to say in how many ways it has affected me. I cried, I smiled, I laughed...I jumped my chair and starting talking with my computer. Hands down, it's the best Alice and Jasper love story I have read. From this moment forward, this is canon for me. It is so wonderful, words cannot describe it. I have always wondered how their love story started. Now I know. Thank you for gifting us with such an amazing story. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. I am in love with it. You know those things on youtube...the doctors says you have 4 minutes to live...on a video of 4 minutes? If the doctor said that i got half an hour, I'd read your story. And before today I have never thought about anything like it. Thank you once again. |
Kageyjay chapter 12 . 5/31/2018 That was amazing! The struggles they both had during the journey leading to that wedding was so well written! It was surprising that after the scene when they first met, Jasper was so distrusting of Alice. But it was actually more realistic that he would react as the soldier he was. Thank you! |
lol chapter 13 . 2/5/2018 The last time I read and reviewed this I just pointed out a spelling mistake in chapter 12. I didn't say anything about this story. (What the hell was wrong with me back then?! :D) So anyway, now it's time for this, I suppose. I can't put into words how much I love this story and how much I respect you as an author. I've read all of your stories (and got slightly pissed because of Rising From The Ashes being incomplete; sorry for the flames :P) and I need to tell you that you are THE BEST author regarding Alice/Jasper fanfics! I've read many stories and, believe me, not one of them has captured their love and their characters as well as you have. No kidding. And although I know that you're not active anymore, I wanted to thank you for sharing all of your stories with us! Best wishes for the future. |
Jessica314 chapter 12 . 1/12/2018 Beautifully done! I so appreciate the time the texture you have their early relationship... Jasper's suspicion, Alice's uncertainty yet stubborn persistance... it made the triumph of their love that much sweeter. It was especially good to see Jasper's healing over the course of the story. I know you don't write for Twilight anymore, but we still appreciate and enjoy your stories... thank you! |
sillybilly4 chapter 9 . 1/2/2018 so where is this story? is it a fanfic? do u still have more to write? |
sillybilly4 chapter 12 . 1/2/2018 swoon. sigh. no words... well, except that this was the most perfect jasper and alice story ever! i was just a tad worried when he turned on her in the beginning, but it was so beautiful the way she chased after him and never gave up and slowly chipped away at his hardened heart. made it all the more sweeter! i'm saving this one as a favorite, and can't wait to see what other stories you have! |
Guest chapter 9 . 9/30/2016 Oh god that was just omj I loved it. The songs I listened to went perfect omigod I'm gonna die I have looked for something like this for a while |
Sunset'90 chapter 13 . 1/18/2015 My refuge while I'm feeling down... I have read this a million times... but I still come back years later... Wow it's been around 5 years now. I still remember myself eagerly looking into my email early in the morning for an update. My first Fanfiction favorite author of all times, OverProtectiveFool, now AnEnduringHope, Thank you for such wonderful stories... |
ilovebooks1111 chapter 12 . 9/19/2014 Wow! Amazing story! I loved jaspers first reaction to Alice! It is much more realistic if you look at jasper's life and character than the other versions! And I lived your companion piece too...but I felt a little lazy today so I'm telling you here itself ;) |
LoveIsTheOnlyAnswer chapter 6 . 7/25/2013 I don't know if you read these comments anymore but let me just tell you that I think this is probably the best story I've ever read of Alice and Jasper. I almost cried literally at this chapter. So beautiful :) |