This story had promise, but now it's tragically silly. Why would a man who likes to molest and sexually assault little girls suddenly assault his adult daughter? In the early part of the story, it was stated that George Cabot stopped being interested in Alex and began molesting and sexually assaulting her younger sister because she was more innocent. Now he decides to rape an adult Alex? And they find Alex locked in a basement at her father's home-she's been missing for a day or more and they don't do anything about it till the middle of the night after Alex has nightmares. Liv doesn't even question her as to why she was at her father's locked in the basement?! Very strange plot line.

I loved this story and was sad to reach the end.

I thought the ending was good

I really liked this story. You did a great job.

Oh no, it's over? This was one of my favourites, how can it end? Oh, the horror! ) Anyway, please keep writing, you're really great, and you're grammar is awesomely easy to read, unlike a lot of the stories on here. Love it, keep going!

You ended on a note of hope and that is what I am going to let it be. Nice twist and improv in your ending.

Intense. Good story.

Enjoyed the story, nice ending.

Aww cute chapter but I wonder what it is Alex thinks she has or could ever do to make her retreat away like that...hm...will we be finding more out soon? I hope so love the story and I can't wait to read more

Oh, that was so sweet! and I know that book! I love it, I got it for my son. Can't think of a better ending.

Good job.

I'm glad I caught up with the story. Relieved that George Cabot was caught and is going down for some of his crimes. I adore that Olivia really loves and looks out for Alex including reminding her how special she is to her. The beautiful way you portrayed Alex and Olivia's night of love and the truly respectful loving aftermath of Alex's nightmare was spot on.

Really great writing, can't wait for the final chapter! Wish it didn't have to end soon!

Very nicely written chapter.

amazing chapter, I love how Olivia doesn't care if there is sex or not, and makes sure in her own way to tell Alex that. what I really love is how Alex realizes she really doesn't want to and it's ok to want it at one point then later say no, best chapter with just the two of them yet! more please.

Naww Alex D:

Another fantastic chapter, Keep up the good work :3