AWSOME

This was ABSOLUTELY beautiful.

i loved it. that was one of the best one shots i've read in a while.

AWWWWWWWWWWW so freaking cute AMAZING

I almost cried! So, so beautiful! We need more stories like this on here, like seriously. Keep it up!

you're a frickin' genius, Jen ;D For your first M-Rated one-shot, YOU EFFING KILLED IT, GENIUS. THIS WAS AMAZING! D I'm so happy you posted it. I don't even know what you didn't like about it. It was really really good.

I'm glad you have finally joined the club.

Nothing was terribly awkward and trust me, you'll be writing more in no time ;D I look forward to it now. :) Amazing job. This was angsty, sweet, romantic and just..gah, hot Moliver loveydovey sex. It was good. Oliver was so sweet, when he was telling her all those things in the shower ;) Honestly, melted my heart. D

great job ;)

I wanted to castrate Oliver at the beginning of this. No lie. Heh

BUT he made it up with the roses and strawberries and whipped cream and champagne!

This was good! YOU ARE NO LONGER A VIRGIN

AH

I'M

THE

ONLY

VIRGIN

OMGOMGOMGOMG

it's okay. I'll be a nun :D i am Catholic after all :D

CONGRATS ON LOSING YOUR V-CARD AND GREAT JOB!

p.s. i wonder how many lotion/ baby oil bottles oliver used up those five months? HOMG probably enough to substantially clear the gulf of oil! YES! OLIVER'S SEX DRIVE SAVED THE WORLD! Actually, Miley probably helped too...YAY FOR THEM! I GET TO SWIM AT THE BEACH THIS SUMMER NOW AND NOT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT WASHED UP SEALS!

Ahh! You lost it! We're both in the same non-M virgins club now lmao.

That was amazing. You had no reason to be worried about it. The beinning was sad. :( He had a little tiny brain blackout lol. There's no other excuse.

Great job. :D