Haha! This is hilarious! Especially...I don't know..ALL of them!

Wow...

Bahahahaha. They could have had it cleaned by then! It's got to be so easy with magic!

Aahahahahaa, this is hilariously wonderful.

Great story. It was really funny. I love how Peter delegated it to James and Sirius, that was a crack up. Great work, it was really funny.

XD I loved that! The marauders are just so lovable, and i can totally picture them doing this!

i feel like a meanie not saying anything else, but GREAT JOB! That was Totally Awesome! (Yea, a over-used 'A Very Potter Musical' quote, sue me)

They're only loyal when it comes to matters other than cleaning :-D

I really fell out of my chair, this story was brilliant and funny, I loved it!

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

I haven't laughed so much at one of these all dialogue fics in long time. Nice to see Peter stand up for himself!

I really enjoyed this. I also liked how you had no description, just the words, and your characterisation was really good so it was quite easy to figure out who was who ;)

Oh, this was great. *wipes tears of laughter* I usually don't enjoy all-dialogue fics simply because when there are more than two people I get terribly confused about who's talking, but this was perfect! Everyone had their own voice, and to be honest I don't think it would have been as funny if there were any descriptions. The Marauders were great, especially at the end where Peter outwitted Sirius and James and then Sirius ran away, leaving James to clean the dorm. I usually end up in James's position when things like that happen to me, so I felt for him. XD

Wonderful job!

Brilliant! I love the end. There has to have been a reason Peter was a Marauder in the first place and I think you just hit that reason right on the head!

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Loved it!

Absolutely hilarious, and I was smiling/laughing the whole way through reading this!

Perfecto!

Thanks so much for writing and sharing!

This had me grinning. I absolutely LOVED it. Because the humour is slow-building, and the all-dialogue-ness is hard to get used to, but once I got into it it was just plain wonderful. :) I think you really took to using all dialogue, and I love how you used your proverb!

Nitpick: "Let me know one it's safe to come back here without choking on toxic fumes, and then we'll see."" - 'one' should be 'once'.

The characterisation was marvellous; they all seemed to have their own way of speaking, and the banter was very well executed - funny, too. Lily and Marlene were great. I wasn't particularly keen on Peter's characterisation at first, but then he just turned things around on them at the end. That 'twas a genius ending!

Thanks for sharing. This was really entertaining.~

Good idea! I love your style of writing. The content made me laugh a little bit, especially at shortening "Padfoot" to "Pads". Simple things please simple minds eyy. Keep up the good work!

Hee. This is fun.