This is too good. To tears. To a silly smile.
Really good, deep and painfully true.
Thank.

wish that it was longer but it was really good

Beautiful

Beautiful story! Thank you for sharing.

I love your story! I'd always been afraid of non-canon couples, but you've helped me change my perspective.

I was silent for a long time after I read the chapter.
I'm stunned. it felt like something cut out from a movie.
like You inserted the forces of nature and God into the scene.
Thunder and lightning, as occurred in the soul of Carlisle.
Their love-making was sacred.
Outside, the Genesis deluge that destroyed the world but their love was their Noach ark.
It was bigger than life. Or should i write bigger then Fanfic.

I'm sure it was not easy for you to write it.

It was so lovely, from the moment they arrived the clearing, I could not breathe, my lungs abut to explode before the kiss and after he left ...No! (Whimpering and banging the head on the table)

ho, that was a beautiful scene.

Oh no, oh no, oh no, this is not good (biting my nails)

what on Opening .. (rubbing hands with glee) can not wait next.

I absolutely love this story. Especially the stormy sex sene. Great!

"full that movement was rather uncomfortable. We hunted until the taste of Bella's blood was nothing more than a memory, and moose once again had the delicious maple syrup taste that I had always enjoyed in the past."

I can't stop laughing. Holy F*** . Thats the best thing I've ever read.

Moose taste like maple syrup in Canada .
Please update this

Such a wonderful, emotional story! Your characterization of Carlisle was perfect. Thank you for this amazing CxB journey!
Rachel xxoo

I read this story again and again and it always brings tears to my eyes.