Yes. Finally.

"Why do you always turn this around on me? Why can't you see how badly you hurt me! I tried to help you! Do you remember that? I stood by you every time your pregnancy tests came back negative. I offered alternatives to you…because I was willing to do everything for you…infertility treatments…adoption…surrogacy…anything to get you a baby…but it wasn't good enough for you…I wasn't good enough for you! I even begged you to go to couples counseling with me!"

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So, does this make cheating acceptable? Tf

Someone should beat the sht out of Edward. He's so annoying.

Wtf.

I seriously want to hit Edward. He's so insensitive.

shit riley is pissing me off the Dickhead. i cant .
believe this
but this is a very good story. excuse my language i dont often swear that much but i cant help it this time

ok so at first i was pissed off at edward. then i was pissed at bella.
now its both of them.
they really screwed everything up.
but Im gonna keep reading

Women need to have more respect for themselves. Sadly we live in a society that does not teach girls that. we're taught to put up with any and everything, to just except the way men treat us because you know that's just men being men or boys will be boys.

Edward is the biggest butthole in this story, narcissistic and so completely full of himself, the boy needs a reality check. I don't feel one ounce of sorry for him. Bella needs to run for the Hills quick as possible.

What about Emmett, Rose, Alice and Jasper...did they never have children of their own? This was an interesting story, it was a long journey for these two and good to see their lives were full of good times and in the bad they banded together in a family unit.
thanks for keeping the story here for readers like myself. I've left my comments as thoughts and thanks along the way.

Gee, seemed like Edward and Bella were more concerned about their daughter going off to a normal rite of passage to a college than they were with their 14 year old son who got a girl pregnant at his first party. I really disliked that added conflict into an already drama filled story at the end. Had not these two learned from their own mistakes that not having some independence and being out in the world with typical teen behavior like dating etc. Hard to believe that JJ a year younger than Char made it a point of working hard to graduate ahead of his classmates to join a girl he's loved since they were in diapers. idk, maybe it's me but having E/B follow that plot line was fine but to add it to their children and then on top of that, a 'child' having a child and the poor kid's life was stunted at fourteen and he was happy raising a child while the rest of his peers are playing sports and video games...poor kid. But hey it's fan fiction...And why would Edward be more concerned that his 22 year old daughter out of school and out on her own living with her husband be nervous about her possibly being pregnant.

I love the name they selected for their little guy. It was nice that each side of the family got honored by the names of the children. Charley's kiss to her new baby brother was sweet. Love that Esme and Charlie are forming a solid friendship as they both can relate to their losses.

I had a feeling Bella would have gotten pregnant on their first time back having sex. And it's bittersweet that they are all happy while having just lost Carlisle. I was thinking back to when Esme and Carlisle decided to move closer to Edward and left the other kids behind. It seems like they were doing the same thing they always did and put Edward before the others. But now the others are going to move to be close to Esme to help ease her loss. Anyway, getting remarried, in a gazebo, nice.

Did we really need for Carlisle to die after all these two have gone through it would be nice to have them as one happy family for awhile.

I like how all this is starting to be more realistic as these two go to therapy, deal with their anger and the process of forgiveness. It's nice seeing them forge relationships like James and Tanya and Bella being out and about in her own career teaching while Edward starts to use his art passion with being asked to do the salon and taking it upon himself to illustrate Bella's children's book.

He’s such a delightfully douchy douche! He deserves Lauren.