That was really good and adorable I've been looking for some quality fanfics for this game but had yet to find any and I'm quite nervous about writing my own

Hey that was a cool little short story, loved the opening could really imagine it.
Written pretty well too, thought Crypto was in character after all,
having characters evolve and learn is good storytelling.
Makes us feel for them, just how crypto starts to feel for Li, I guess :)

Ending kinda faded out, but I liked how they realised it wouldnt work.
Happens sometimes. Great story

I don't know what to say.
10/10
there.

This is pretty nice, but I wish there was more, like just who Li is, how she met Crypto and Pox, why they didn't kill her, and how she knew about Natalia. Other than wanting more story, this is good.

They are just too cute! Keep up the good work.

Coooooools _

Not very often I like a video game enough to actually SEARCH for a fanfiction, but less often do I find a decent fic on the first try. I do applaud you on your ability, and the author's notes are humorous, and I would be overjoyed to see a sequel of some sort (though it seems that would never happen, though you can't blame a girl for trying D), and this is a cute story, all in all.

*fails at reviews*