I did realized the warning about character shift and felt it while reading Ulquiorra scene in chapter 9 and Orihime also still have the sting from the jellyfish. Hope you'll update the revise soon (and chapter 14 also)

This is definitely one of my most favourite UlquiHime fic ever.

OMG I love this fiction so much. They're so cute tgt. I like that you portrayed characters exactly from the manga. Orihime is very optimistic and shy just like this. Ulquiorra supposed to learn a lot in human world just like this, and he's soooooo cute this way. Only a bit sad that all his power is gone.

BTW I'm happy to see that you keep revising the chapters. Hope you will have time to update soon.

I just found your fic. It's very relaxing to read. I like your shy Ulquiorra and ou made me miss this couple very much!, really hope this storyline have happened in the original story. I stop reading Bleach since one of my friend spoiled Ulquiorra's death, seriously.

Plus your writing is sooo smooth. Please keep up your work!

You're writing is one of the best ones I've ever read! After reading this fic I read some of your other works and they were also great! I really like to read them again from time to time. I also love the dynamics that you created between Orihime and Ulquiorra, they stay true to their characters!

when are you going to update? oh man, i need more!

You are amazing at writing. Thank you so so much for this gem... you haven’t posted a new update in so long which worries me that this fic will be left unfinished, but regardless I thoroughly enjoyed these two. Their chemistry is insane... I absolutely adore these two. They are so opposite yet perfect for one another. You’ve portrayed them so well... the detail you add to this fic is insane. thank you thank you thank you!

I will be hoping for another update.

She called him by name once in the entire series, but who cares

Ugh! How could you give up on such a cliffhanger! Gah! Still, very nice writing! I love your version of Orihime!

This story is a favorite of mine, certainly for this pairing but as a fanfic as well. That said, seeing how you’ve been revising throughout the years makes me especially happy and appreciative of how much effort you’re investing in this. Now for a few specifics; Ulquiorra’s intensity was on full display throughout the story, his probing stares and penchant for seductive ear whisperings were incredibly alluring. Not to mention the way you went into such sharp detail on kissing; never before had I come across someone who could create so much suspense for such a simple gesture. Additionally, I liked the couples cruise concept, it left room for many laugh out loud moments.

Like everyone else, I would love to see this get the conclusion it undoubtedly deserves but even if it remains how it is I’m still grateful to have had the opportunity to read such an engaging story. To anyone hesitant to start an incomplete work, know that it’s absolutely worth reading.

Oh no a cliff hanger...
Why oh why they were getting along so well.

I wish u would update soon.

I love it, I can't wait to read the next one

i getting hopeless
it's been years but i want to see this till the end.

oh my goooood, I loved reading the story the first time and ive fallen in love again with what you wrote and edited omg like it seems much more realistic but very in character and jeez I cant wait for the rest!

AHHHHH I FUCKING LOVE THIS I CANT STAND THE TENSION BUT ITS SOOOOOO LOVELY