I can't get it to work.

This is one for me. This is my favorite AkuRoku ever.

THIS WAS CUTTTEEEE PLEASE MAKE MORE ROKUSHI FANFICS!

Haha thats cute xD

Namine is heartless-_-
And omg i love your story its hard to find a good fanfic nowadays

This was beautiful to read. There aren't many other words to describe it.
Beautiful, simply beautiful.

really one of the better fics I've read. No mushy stuff or awkward lemons that only creeps read. It was an accurate representation of Roxas and Xion down to mimicking Day 321: Waning Power and capturing the magical moment of friendship in Day 352: Sunset. Along with exact quotes and re-statements in the first couple chapters, the Big Twist was innovative and logical. I too claim that Roxas and Xion had hearts and were not actually Nobodies. #1: you must have a heart to wield a keyblade. #2: Roxas looks like Ventus, so after Sora got turned into a Heartless, Roxas was left with Ventus's heart. Xion got her heart by mimicking Roxas's heart that he got from Ventus. #3: both Roxas and Xion displayed emotions during the game that would be impossible for Nobodies. Since both of them had hearts, they could essentially become heartless and lose their hearts, creating Nobodies because they have hearts of their own, explaining their rebirth. Even the part about them having to experience all emotions to be separate themselves with Sora makes logical sense. The only part you kind of hand-waved was that it was not Xion's choice to fight Roxas. The Organization made her do it after she got captured by Axel a second time, referring to the 358/2 Days cutscene "Xion and Axel Face Off." What happens that stops Axel from capturing her again? Does Xemnas just randomly not give orders for him to retrieve her in this timeline? Other than that, everything makes sense. Good dedication and nice job capturing Roxas and Xion as they truly are in references to the manga and the game, along with your own fiction.

I loved it make more man!

Great last chapter! I also wish you the best of luck on the animation you'll be making I can't wait to watch it!

Good story, I liked the equal out of comedy and romance, Ill keep an eye out for your other works, but dont burn the house down! I always say that but one day I will forget *shakes fist dramatically* XD

This was a wonderful read. I like how you managed to keep Roxas and Xion out of Sora and have Sora wake up yet somehow NOT horribly mangle canon-law. This was quite inspired. Kudos!

Questions (-that you might not answer because it's been years and you probably don't really care anymore): -Doesn't Namine have to return to Kairi?
-What happened to DiZ?
-What happed to O. XIII?
-Why didn't Roxas/Xion/Axel just cast 'heal'? Or, failing that, why didn't Axel just give Xion a potion?

Something strange between the previous and this chapter: "When did Sora wake and start a conversation with Namine and Riku?" Also you might want to add POV sections to clear whose talks.

Aside of that, this is such a good and touchy story.

AMAAAZING! I loved this story, I was a bit intimidated cuz of it's length but I finally finished oh and i love the band Rise Against and I've had the song Savior for such a long time buy never realized the similarities XD cuz amazing great work.

Why:[ :{ :(

Excellent story! Looking forward to reading your next work. Although, I do have to ask, why didn't O XIII chase the pair down as soon as they left?